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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2014 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 12: Exceptions to the Rules

Ah Maggie, you devilish girl.



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;)

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2014 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 12: Exceptions to the Rules

cant wait to read what happens next. 

 

Oh and more Nancy please!



Author's Response:

Thanks man. There will be more Nancy later on, and in a much more vigorous helping.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2014 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 12: Exceptions to the Rules

“I know, I get it Mom. It’s fine. Do you have Scott?” the teen asked innocently, suddenly shifting her tone again. “I need him.”

“You need him?”

“Yeah. He’s all gross. I had him in my sock for the very end of the game, so I was gonna give him a bath.”
XD

That being said, you have no idea how much Maggie surprised me - twice, I expected her to let him thank sis before going on; yep, I briefly forgot who she is :)

Now, if I were him, I'd probably be looking for a way to ask Judy permission to talk to Ella - she was looking for him after all, he could ask mommy to call her for him, but he would have to think carefully about it.


PS
I had finally started to read your Omega story (looks great atm), this chapter is one more distraction from it; I hate you guy so very very much... ;p

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Glad Maggie can still surprise readers at this point in the series. Not a bad thought about asking Judy to call Ella, though I'll note that there's definitely something a bit more sinister going on with Scott's mother that might complicate that chance. I hope you enjoy the Omega story.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2014 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 12: Exceptions to the Rules

I'm actually liking this new Maggie. The whole tic for tac idea is great. Maybe she'll get her toenails painted after all. Love how she used the phone call against Scott even though he didn't technically do anything other than trying to answer the phone(can't remember if that was a rule). And using Ella as a means for Maggie to get what she wants is inspired. Still want to see Maggie at a tiny size with Judy but I'm willing to ride this new Maggie wave where ever it takes me.

aaron
PS how did Maggie slide off the bed with Scott between her legs? Maybe I just read that wrong but other than that great foreboding chapter I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Judy did say that Scott can't make calls, so Maggie wasn't necessarily making up a rule. And Maggie has a master manipulator for a mother, so she's learned from the best.

I see the issue with the wording that you pointed out. I meant to imply that she lifted her leg over Scott and slid off, so I changed that sentence to show it.

Reviewer: socksarecool Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2014 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 12: Exceptions to the Rules

It's pretty clear that Maggie will no longer hold back after this chapter. 

"The kind where if you promise not to tell Mom about stuff, I’ll promise not to tell her about stuff too"

This line is a stroke of genius and I can't wait to see Maggie take it to the next level with Scott. She was rubbing him against her breast even before this proposal so it's clear that the only thing holding her back was the fact that Scott would alert his mother if she ever went too far with him and now this proposal ensures that won't happen.

I believe that Scott is going to be a victim of Maggie's sexual frustrations. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. It's probably no secret that Maggie has some fairly inappropriate plans for Scott, though I hope the situation in which they eventually happen will be something of a suprise.

Reviewer: Orpheus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2014 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 12: Exceptions to the Rules

I'll admit my heart was beating with hatred for Maggie when I started the chapter,  but you couldn't possibly imagine the sense of relief that had welled over me when I finished. Thank you for letting poor Scott off softly this time around Jacksmith, but I can't help but think this little exchange of truce is a caveat of something truly horrible to come. Nice job as always.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. I do let Scott off the hook occasionally. Though I won't spoil, you're right that this is a bit of a calm before the storm.

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