[Report This]Date: November 05 2014 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 14: Mommy's Maw
Toothache... I'm used to being surprised by her actions, but I swear this one was surprising even by her standards (and even knowing she always has a reasonable official explanation for what she does).
Oh - "he could tell Judy had made any attempt", shouldn't it be "hadn't"? (or "an")
Author's Response:
Good catch on that typo.
Date: October 28 2014 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 14: Mommy's Maw
Does she truly want her son to become a strong and indepedant man? All these humilating experiences is turning him into a scared nervous wreck. Its going to take years of therapy to make him anywhere near a normal functioning person. The first thing he should do if and when he's released is take the next bus out of town and not look back. Divorce himself from his disfunctional family. I place this story in the category of "I can't watch anymore of this, but its too complelling to put down". The author must be doing something right, but it feels so wrong at the same time.
Author's Response:
It's a good question you're asking. All I'll say is that Judy may not want her son to turn out quite as independent as she sometimes tells him. Glad to hear you're having difficulty looking at this story directly!
[Report This]Date: October 27 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 14: Mommy's Maw
Amazing story and chapter :) can't wait to see where this goes!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks. It'll be shown very soon.
[Report This]Date: October 27 2014 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 14: Mommy's Maw
Great stuff.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: October 27 2014 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 14: Mommy's Maw
The way you've written Scott's feeling of dread was remarkable. Likewise the way in which Judy broached the subject about her problem tooth. I still don't know what to make of how you keep reiterating how her being uncharacteristically nicer and such now, almost as if in a foreboding way or that Judy is feeling "different" love towards her son... At any rate, I'm glad you didn't rush through the process of her getting him acquainted with her maw, makes for a better read in my opinion.
I'm kinda curious now seeing as how we're going to be on chapter 18 with little to no mention of Judy's political endeavors, will there be another story for that or is this one going to be a lot longer?
aaron
PS by "different" I meant in a platonic way.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, man. All I'll say for now is that there is a reason I keep bringing up how uncharacteristically kind she's seeming. Judy's political endeavors, for the most part, happen in the background of this story, though particularly near the end, we'll see a lot of that come to the forefront. This is also going to be a longer story, coming in at around 30 chapters.
You're right about the platonic thing. I of course write the story in a certain way so that fetish readers can enjoy it, but Judy herself is not meant to be acting sexually toward her son.
[Report This]Date: October 27 2014 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 14: Mommy's Maw
Wow things just aren't getting any better for him...at all.
I hope she has a plan in case she accidentally swallows him. She wouldn't just toss him in there without a plan would she?
Author's Response:
Judy's confident enough that she probably assumes the only plan B she needs is spitting him back up if he takes a tumble.