Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 20: Putting on a Show

All hail Maggie for bringing up what he did - that was probably the single most effective thing she could say given the situation.

Yet she made *Scott* promise not to say anything, look angry, scared or whatever; even if Judy doesn't catch them in the act she'll probably ask her why she looks so (insert adjective here) - now I'm REALLY curious to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

Glad it held your interest. The next chapter will appear soon.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2014 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 20: Putting on a Show

Great chapter. Again there is little to criticize about. I love how Maggie refuses to listen to Libby. I think she is actually getting annoyed with her and the peskering she is doing. She seems to want to be to soft on Scott. I know Lib has a crush on him but doesn't she understand the crime he commited. I cannot understand why she loves him so much. However I cannot wait to see where this story goes. Somehow I get the feeling Maggies isnot finished with scott yet. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response:

Bad as Scott's crime was, Libby just recognizes how positively draining the punishment is on Scott. Plus, she's liked him long enough that the crush is harder to shake. Thanks for reviewing!