[Report This]Date: December 27 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 25: Family Politics
Great chapter, no mistakes yet again. I'm just wondering if Scott is holding his emotions back and if he is when the will blow. Also I cannot wait to see what happens if he blows or if Judy finds out he used the phone. I caanot wait for the next chapter, keep up the great work. You are an awesome writer.
Author's Response:
For now, Scott's just trying to keep it together so he can see Ella later in the day, but he also is made incredibly uneasy by his mother's current attitude. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: December 27 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 25: Family Politics
Another great chapter, looking forward to Nancy getting her fun with Scott and for to see what's in store for Scott at the museum.
Also, i really hope Judy's motherly affection to Scott isn't all an act. I like thinking that while she likes having fun with Scott at this size, she does still care for his well being.
Helps differentiate her from Maggie.
Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter, the museum sounds like it's going to be fun.
Author's Response:
It's fair to say that Judy doesn't want Scott physically harmed, though of course that doesn't mean she can't also strategically place affection to get what she wants at the same time.
Judy certainly is very different from Maggie in some key ways; hopefully by the end of this story, those will be even clearer. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
[Report This]Date: December 27 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 25: Family Politics
Judy is acting very strangly recently. I wonder why.
Too many mysterious things in this chapter to draw conclusions. Only time will tell now.
Although, it was a very interesting chapter. Just kinda hard to wrap my head around everything.
I cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hehe. This chapter definitely is meant to add a little mystery, particularly where Judy's concerned. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: December 27 2014 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 25: Family Politics
I think mom knows a little more than she's letting on, that said I am curious what the big news/reason is for the gf to request the meeting.
Good stuff.
Author's Response:
You're right about Judy there. And Ella's view of everything will be made clear closer to the end of the story.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2014 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 25: Family Politics
Not miffed about the Nancy situation because I know she'll get her moment in the sun.
But the reason why Judy's been so nice to Scott finally makes sense. She's been manipulating him so that he doesn't embarrass her or cause problems for her campaign at this garden party. She's just telling him what he wants to hear to pacify him. I still wasn't convinced until she said she'd "look the other way" for any of his transgressions from now on as long as he does this for her... She's doing a masterful manipulation job on her son. I'm loving ever minute of it and can't wait for the other shoe to fall.
aaron
PS really getting into this story more and more with each passing chapter. Well done.
Author's Response:
You're definitely on the right track about Judy's motivations. And even though she's seemingly laying it on the line here, there are still things she's not bringing up yet that may come to light soon. Thanks for reviewing.