Date: March 08 2015 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 28: Nancy Gets Her Way
Oh, having read the comments on chapter 28: "Nancy's actions won't go unnoticed by Scott's family". The story is done, so it's too late to predict their reactions without looking ridiculous, but - Hallelujah!
Author's Response:
Hehe. I'm not always a 100% jerk to my characters, I promise. Sometimes...
[Report This]Date: March 08 2015 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 28: Nancy Gets Her Way
Real Life had a small part as well, but seriously - it took me WEEKS to read these last few chapters, take it as a compliment; especially since there's a few more AND I have yet to read the new Julia chapters! (and the new stories, and catch up on the Omega spinoff...)
A couple of sparse notes:
"And then Scott’s air froze in his chest. He hacked desperately, somehow fighting his way back into a normal breathing pattern, and clenched his muscles up, tightening his fists and shuddering at the feeling of Nancy’s sweaty palms clasped against his stomach and legs to hold him steady." - For the 1st time I'm really proud of him. Not that he should care, but...
"lenses of his classes" (a few chapters ago)
Author's Response:
Sounds like an endurance. I appreciate you reading all my stuff even as it continues piling up. Hope you like the new stories and the end of this one.
And thanks for catching the typo.
[Report This]Date: January 31 2015 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 28: Nancy Gets Her Way
nancy's ready for round 2!
Author's Response:
This may be true, although there might be factors preventing any further fun for her...
[Report This]Date: January 31 2015 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 28: Nancy Gets Her Way
Wait... If that shrinking thing is something Judy wants to make permanent and Kyle will be shrunk in part 7... Will he be stuck like that too? And is it me or is Maggie genuinely concerned for Scott?
Author's Response:
Judy's just looking to make criminal shrinking permanent, meaning Kyle would have commit a serious offense first for that to happen. However, until he's an independent, she can still shrink him whenever she wants for general discipline. And I don't think it's just you. ;)
[Report This]Date: January 30 2015 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 28: Nancy Gets Her Way
Nancy probably should hope Judy doesn't find out about this. What she did to Scott might certainly count as going too far.
It's certainly worse than anything Judy or Maggie have done.
Author's Response:
Definitely safe to say this is the most extreme thing to happen to Scott yet. Nancy's actions will indeed become known though.
[Report This]Date: January 30 2015 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 28: Nancy Gets Her Way
Wow. Didn't realize I'd missed a chapter. Damn Judy gave Nancy the authority to shrink Scott. Or was that simply Nancy saying something to get what see wants?
All I know is that I cannot wait till Judy gets some alone time with her son. He needs his family more than ever but does he even have one now? The only one that sees Scott with indifference is his brother. I'm also wondering if Judy will stop seeing Scott as her son?
Oh yeah Ella still cares for him or so she claims but it will be interesting to see that develop as well.
aaron
PS I am going to find it hard to believe that Scott can keep Nancy's rape of him to himself. I guess what I'm asking is will Judy show Scott her true colors by remaining indifferent to Nancy's funny molestation of her son? Cause I can't imagine Nancy covering her tracks too well. Well anyways, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapters.
Author's Response:
Nancy still doesn't have the ability to shrink Scott, she just means she feels she can do whatever she wants to him. The finale of this story will be some much-needed one-on-one time for Judy and Scott to lay things on the line. All I'll say now is that a few characters may have a perspective shift on Scott by the time this story is over.
Nancy's actions won't go unnoticed by Scott's family, and they will be answered in a couple different ways.
[Report This]Date: January 30 2015 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 28: Nancy Gets Her Way
Grat chapter. I love how she even told him she was acting. I wonder if this is as far as Nancy will go. Some how I doubt that. Also I know that Maggie must be wondering where the two went off. If Maggie or God forbid Ella saw what happened they might lose all respect and even have a few ideas for Scott. I cannot wait to see where this chapter goes. There are so many possiblities. As for grammar/spelling I could find no noticable mistakes. Keep up the great work. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hehe. I won't answer any of these predictions since you'll find out soon enough, but I think you may be surprised by some of what's coming. Thanks for reading!
Date: January 30 2015 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 28: Nancy Gets Her Way
Great chap to show Nancy's predatory n pervers' mind! Just a question from a non english reader: Is scott hit by the doggy door or Nancy's foot?Sorry sometime sentences/grammar can be tricky for me.
Author's Response:
It was Nancy's foot that hit him. Thanks for reviewing!