Date: February 04 2015 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 29: Maggie's Actions
i admit that when i saw title of your latast chap "Maggie's actions", i thought Maggie was gonna confront Nancy and the things would've nasty! for Scott 1 of new goal could be protect to his siblings from Judy's sick mind. Maybe Ella could be a ally as grilfriend or not!
Author's Response:
Especially after his encounter with Maggie, Scott is realizing how damaged all Judy's children are, not just him, and that he can't just give up yet without trying to do something about it.
[Report This]Date: February 04 2015 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 29: Maggie's Actions
Maggie face turn? I can honestly say I did not see that coming but Nancy does seem to take over her roll as #2 big bad going forward behind Judy.
Author's Response:
Probably a fair bet about Nancy, although Judy still has a few things to say at the end that may alter the status quo.
[Report This]Date: February 04 2015 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 27: Where Were We?
That woman... I'm still stuck ~ half of chapter 27, I swear *I* need to think of Ella when I see her!
Author's Response:
And that thought is just barely enough for Scott to make it. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: February 03 2015 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 29: Maggie's Actions
Wow!! This story and this series just keeps getting better. This chapter really felt like a total game changer. You truely are a gifted writer.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much, I appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: February 03 2015 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 29: Maggie's Actions
A very heartwarming chapter, it was nice to Maggie showing empathy. She's obviously not happy with Nancy, so the question is, will Maggie tell Judy what Nancy did or will Maggie take matters into her own hands to make sure Nancy never rapes Scott again?
Looking forward to Ella's return and what she might think.
I also look forward to see if Judy thinks Nancy has gone too far.
Author's Response:
Maggie will definitely make sure something is done about Nancy.
Judy's got plenty of opinions about the events of this day that will be shown in the final chapters.
[Report This]Date: February 03 2015 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 29: Maggie's Actions
The heartwarming turn I was hoping for.
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it!
Date: February 03 2015 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
emotional chap for maggie n scott. Indeed, she's opening her eyes in front her bro's reality even she still conflicted she didn't say sorry...
Author's Response:
This is definitely something of a little awakening for Maggie.
Date: February 03 2015 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 29: Maggie's Actions
I love this chapter. Even though I hope this isn't the end of a raunchy Maggie, I'm glad that she is realizing how messed up Scott's life is and you really showed how conflicted she was towards everything going on.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'll say Maggie will be a bit different after this interaction with Scott, though that's not to say she can't still be a source of trouble.
Date: January 31 2015 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Do u plan to update TO 6 again or the freshman ?
Author's Response:
Both will get updates again soon.
[Report This]Date: January 31 2015 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 28: Nancy Gets Her Way
nancy's ready for round 2!
Author's Response:
This may be true, although there might be factors preventing any further fun for her...
[Report This]Date: January 31 2015 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 28: Nancy Gets Her Way
Wait... If that shrinking thing is something Judy wants to make permanent and Kyle will be shrunk in part 7... Will he be stuck like that too? And is it me or is Maggie genuinely concerned for Scott?
Author's Response:
Judy's just looking to make criminal shrinking permanent, meaning Kyle would have commit a serious offense first for that to happen. However, until he's an independent, she can still shrink him whenever she wants for general discipline. And I don't think it's just you. ;)
Date: January 31 2015 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
By reading reviews, It seems readers considers Judy did not know Nancy's attitude for Scott But I stongly doubt abt that.
Author's Response:
Judy may be aware of more than she's letting on, which we'll see very soon.
Date: January 30 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
I guess I'm another of the shrinking violets about the abuse. I just don't read it as erotica anymore, it makes me more disgusted and enraged, especially with Judy and now Nancy. Major kudos to you as a writer because I really, really want to keep reading to see if everyone gets their just desserts, even if I'm not really here for the gtsplay anymore.
Author's Response:
That's fair. Certainly I don't mean to fetishize rape itself, and in general, not everything in this story is meant to be viewed as erotica. Thanks for soldiering on all the same; there will be some repercussions of Nancy's actions here later on.
[Report This]Date: January 30 2015 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 28: Nancy Gets Her Way
Nancy probably should hope Judy doesn't find out about this. What she did to Scott might certainly count as going too far.
It's certainly worse than anything Judy or Maggie have done.
Author's Response:
Definitely safe to say this is the most extreme thing to happen to Scott yet. Nancy's actions will indeed become known though.
[Report This]Date: January 30 2015 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 28: Nancy Gets Her Way
Wow. Didn't realize I'd missed a chapter. Damn Judy gave Nancy the authority to shrink Scott. Or was that simply Nancy saying something to get what see wants?
All I know is that I cannot wait till Judy gets some alone time with her son. He needs his family more than ever but does he even have one now? The only one that sees Scott with indifference is his brother. I'm also wondering if Judy will stop seeing Scott as her son?
Oh yeah Ella still cares for him or so she claims but it will be interesting to see that develop as well.
aaron
PS I am going to find it hard to believe that Scott can keep Nancy's rape of him to himself. I guess what I'm asking is will Judy show Scott her true colors by remaining indifferent to Nancy's funny molestation of her son? Cause I can't imagine Nancy covering her tracks too well. Well anyways, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapters.
Author's Response:
Nancy still doesn't have the ability to shrink Scott, she just means she feels she can do whatever she wants to him. The finale of this story will be some much-needed one-on-one time for Judy and Scott to lay things on the line. All I'll say now is that a few characters may have a perspective shift on Scott by the time this story is over.
Nancy's actions won't go unnoticed by Scott's family, and they will be answered in a couple different ways.
Date: January 30 2015 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
By the way, how many chap are left?
Author's Response:
Four
Date: January 30 2015 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Ok, anyway you look at it, this was rape. Is there no one to stand up for poor Scott? Instinctively I want to say his mother, but she seems to be too focused on her political ambitions and never really listens to Scott. I'm still waiting for Scott to finally break in a way that not even his mother can ignore. I can easily see that if things don't go well with his meeting with Ella, that with all hope lost, that he might start making some attempts on his life.
Author's Response:
It's a good point you raise that Scott is almost out of reasons to go on here, and it will definitely be addressed as we reach the final chapters. Rest assured there will be a good reason for Scott to still be around in the seventh story of this series, and thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: January 30 2015 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 28: Nancy Gets Her Way
Grat chapter. I love how she even told him she was acting. I wonder if this is as far as Nancy will go. Some how I doubt that. Also I know that Maggie must be wondering where the two went off. If Maggie or God forbid Ella saw what happened they might lose all respect and even have a few ideas for Scott. I cannot wait to see where this chapter goes. There are so many possiblities. As for grammar/spelling I could find no noticable mistakes. Keep up the great work. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hehe. I won't answer any of these predictions since you'll find out soon enough, but I think you may be surprised by some of what's coming. Thanks for reading!
Date: January 30 2015 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 28: Nancy Gets Her Way
Great chap to show Nancy's predatory n pervers' mind! Just a question from a non english reader: Is scott hit by the doggy door or Nancy's foot?Sorry sometime sentences/grammar can be tricky for me.
Author's Response:
It was Nancy's foot that hit him. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: January 27 2015 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 27: Where Were We?
Great chapter. I wonder what Nacy has in store for Scott. Will he be safe during his time with Nancy or will her wilder side break free and force him into certain situations. I cannot wait to see where you take this story. Will there be a raunchy part or will this stick with a foot and mouth theme. There are tons of possibilities here. As for grammar and spelling there was on sentence that bothers me. The sentance stated "Honesty at this point couldn’t hurt him more than it already had." Shouldn't the sentance read instead Honesty at this point it couldn’t hurt him more than it already had. I donnot know how you wanted this structure to be, but to me the later sentance reads better. This was the only thing troubling me in this chapter. Besides this I lioved it. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work. You really have a talent.
Author's Response:
Glad you're paying attention. Your suggestion would be right if the word was "honestly" as an adverb, but it's actually "honesty." So if restructured it could say "At this point, honesty couldn't hurt him more than it already had."