Reviews For Racist Giantess
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Reviewer: Sora Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23 2014 12:22 AM Title: The First Night

Wow, I enjoyed every bit of that. Really erotic story. I just love vore, digestion, and elimination. Such a great humiliation factor added with the family scenario. Keep up the great work! 

Reviewer: lfcfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2014 8:45 AM Title: The First Night

This is awesome! Really well described and exactly the violent stuff that I personally like. Well done. :)

But! If I may give you some constructive criticism. Honesly, I didn't exactly feel the racism in this story. I mean, if you took the racial words out of it, it would be just like any other story where the giantess violates the tinies for her own pleasure.

Racism, IMO, should come with a certain kind of special humiliation. It is a really good idea, something that I've thought about writing too because it would be one the best ways to motivate a giantess into doing stuff like this.

That's why I'm saying, if you do continue the story, to try and spice it up a bit more. Perhaps read about cases of white's torturing blacks, the way they did it, the distain they felt for their black skin, and perhaps even use words like Negro's instead of Black's.

Anyway, just my own views. I've come to really appreciate constructive feed-back lately, and that's what I'm trying to do here. I hope you don't take it the wrong way. I will definitely take a look at this if you decide to continue it.

Reviewer: ICM Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2014 7:29 AM Title: The First Night

Yes, on reviewing my title this morning it did sound a bit inflammatory. I've tweaked the title and added my disclaimer to the description. I appreciate your advice Emma Gear and Some_Dude.

Reviewer: Some_Dude Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2014 6:59 AM Title: The First Night

Interesting story and good writing. Very descriptive. However, like Emma Gear commented, you might want to tweak the title and put the disclaimer in the description was well.

Reviewer: Emma Gear Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2014 4:21 AM Title: The First Night

Hey there, haven't read this yet, and I read your description, but I think for your own safety it'd be better if you could change this story's title and maybe the description too. At least so people are forced to read your disclaimer before fully realizing what the story is about. Not trying to censor you in any way of course, but I can guarantee a lot of people are more reactionary than me and could take offense and harass you over it.

Up to you in the end, just offering my input.

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