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Reviewer: Vyse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2014 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

Love this story, hope you continue it some time.

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2014 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

I want rick to die between the two asses of the police woman and our witch!! But farts are what kill him... Not enough oxygen between two asses!! Haha... Anyhow that's my vote on how I would have him killed!!

Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2014 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

The whole story started right at the event of Jesscia shrinking her husband. So we dont really know how she behaved before. She could have abused others but her husband for quite a while already behave she shrank him.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2014 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

I agree with riczar. This story has taken a turn for the dark. Where is this psychotic behavior coming from? Kidnapping, torture, home invasion, rape?

I say you not kill Rick, but have him be injured severely. Enough so that it shocks Jessica into realizing what the hell she's doing.

Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2014 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

What about Jessica commands Nina to put Rick in Nina´s ass or just sit on him till he is turned to pulp ^^ Being humlitated by another dominated one would bring Rick even a step lower in the "ranking" ^^


Oh and btw i LOVE this story, butt action supreme :)

Reviewer: Michael1258 Signed star [Report This]
Date: August 13 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

man i was really hoping to see some giant/giantess action. :/

 

Reviewer: Vyse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

This is an amazing story. The characters are great, and you describe the sexual situations amazingly. I know I'm late to the party, but I vote for option 3 as well. Finally, sequels with the setup you have here is pretty easy. Jessica can just grow and shrink Brad at her pleasure.

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

I vote for the back of her panties!!! More ass action!! The butt is one of the best parts of the giantess!!! Please be the booty!!!

Reviewer: Footsteps Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

Incredible story! You did a wonderful job with the shower! My vote is definitely the ass. He needs to get hugged by her butt cheeks!

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

 

I'm glad to see her love for him overpowering the power trip thoughts.

She's obviously got a dominating personality, at least in bed, so she's struggling a bit with it taking it too far, but she is able to keep herself a bit in check.

Nothing quite as cliche in this fetish as the "you're tiny, therefor my love for you no longer exists" attitude.

 

Reviewer: voredom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2014 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

Loving this so far. Any plans for more butt interactions? Either way, looking forwards to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

After the last chapter I don't think Brad realizes what he just got himself into. It is possible a certain tag that has not been used since he was shrunk, infact the only one not used since he has been shrunk could be on the horizon.

Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

A good chapter!  Probably some explanations are coming in the next chapter depending on how she still feels for her husband.  If she's seriously considering never growing him back, will she care and try to make his life easier and pleasurable (still treat him like her husband, only smaller)?  Or will it all be about her pleasure and what she wants (the toy/pet treatment)  I'm hoping for the first part, with a little of the 2nd mixed in.



Author's Response:

The third chapter is half written but I was interrupted by my wife and wanting to watch true blood before I could finish it. There is more one on one interaction and explanation coming snd done will be in the next chapter. I promise to have more than just insertion and sex, as great as that sounds. I have an idea of what I want but when I get writing I have no idea what is going to come out. 

Reviewer: Benton Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

This is a very strong first chapter, and I wonder where you are going to take this.

Reviewer: zumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

Love the start to this story! I'm certainly looking forward to you continuing it! :) I hope if this is a gentle story that "accidents" occur in the future chapters. ;). Again, though, great start! 



Author's Response:

It won't be all gentle. Tempers will be lost, discipline and humiliation doled out. But there will be no straight up violent cruelty. And yes accidents will happen. Along with shenanigans. 

Reviewer: Michalecs Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

Seems like you've got a good idea here. If this is supposed to be more of a gentle encounter, a simple spicing up of marriage as you theme this, unless your hubby likes the humiliation this could qiuckly fall into the standard "I have no morals suddenly because I shrunk you." and I'd hate to see that happen with a potentially good story.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

Good stuff so far. Sure hope he starts enjoying it.

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