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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 10: Stuck Between a Wet and Soft Place and a Wet and Soft Place.

Wow!

A great chapter!

Where do they go from here?

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 10: Stuck Between a Wet and Soft Place and a Wet and Soft Place.

Fantastic long chapter, but I was kinda confused sometimes when Jessica and Nina were talking. I couldn't tell who was who.

At the end of this chapter, Brad is stuck in whose ass? Nina looks up at Jessica and says 'oh I see'
so is Nina watching Brad go in Jessica's ass or is Nina moving Brad under Nina's ass? Perhaps less pronouns and more of their names.

I kinda forgot about Rick. This chapter was so sexy that I didn't think of him.

Wrapping Rick up with tape like a mummy is my suggestion and I'm glad you like it. Rick can be mummified and then inserted into Nina's ass or pussy.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Brad was under Nina when he got smaller so he wound up under her ass and she felt him down there small enough to be inserted iso she said "Oh I see." Jessica grabbed them both and walked to the couch. So they are both in her hand atm.

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