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Reviewer: Rythmear Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 27 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

It may be your first, but it's certainly not bad! It ends a bit abruptly, but it's still delightful to read. Just a raw expression of 'EVERYTHING IN THAT GENERAL DIRECTION MUST DIE!'

 

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