I dont know what kind of story you had in mind for the Halloween story, but I hoped for a standalone 100% story all about Tommy and his new gf, driving again by his hormons, where he promised it would be better not getting into relationships again and just be there for the club, be there for his friends. I would love a plot like I wrote about in my previous message, which has the ultimate ironic idea of the clubs others members becoming terinated like bugs one by one, and Tommy has no idea about it. There could be so great endings for them, like one getting a horrible experience getting "inserted" into Tommys new gf, by Tommy himself, one getting exterminated like a bug by Tommy, one where it's Tommys fault the micro fell inside a creamy white dip he prepared in the kitchen and he and his gf eats from later while watching TV, and some other ideas. I hope youre not too stressed and things get flattened out again soon. Even if it's some time to get there, I am already looking forward to your Halloween story :) Keep up the great work.

you have voraphilia?a decent bit of people on this site do.

What do you think of my ideas, you dont like them? I thought they would fit so well and also think are really hot to think about, especially the condom one, or the anal/vaginal play while a micro was put there before, and Tommy is totally unaware. Damn it's just coming Wednesday :o

I know I shouldnt ask again but is there a tiny little bit of a chance you could include an unaware vore for Tommy too, maybe just as a part of a chapter also including female vore, it would fit so well in the plot. But if you dont want to it's fine :) Thanks also for always writing back. Lots of authors dont respond on reviews, and it makes me feel awesome hearing from an author I really like and appreciate. Also hope for more vore again in a drink/water glass/onion dip/cereal because those are my favorites :3 I also like it more the normal sized person having a flat tummy, mostly because I like the idea more of an emtpy stomach, so the micro has time to think and go through digestion in a more horrible way. Maybe even, because theres just a tiny pool of liquid at the bottom of the stomach including the micro, the stomach releases it's liquid content by opening the exit and entrance to the small intestine, taking the micro with it, where an even more cruel digestion process would awaite him/her, not digested by stomach acids, but by even stronger digestive enzyms and small intestines alcalic fluids. Thanks again for writing back :)

Great stuff, do go on.

I do enjoy both both male and female vore equally, but I understand people just prefring one. I just thought it would had made a great plot twist, maybe even doesnt need to be a full chapter about it just an adding in between, where one of Tommys friends get vored by Tommy and he doesnt even know it, or later is being told by the "bad guy" who put his friend in the situation. Still looking forward for your stories :) <3

Really nice first chapter, looking forward for the next already a lot. Also reading through the reviews, I would love seeing some unaware too if possible. Thanks for the great stories, I loved your other two on here.

wow man! I loved the first chapter. :)
As a totally blind reader, I had no trouble what so ever with visualisation! :)
looking forward to reading on as it comes.tr

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and that visualization was easy!

This looks really promising so far :) Though Im mostly just into unaware, and it's not under the story tags :/ Maybe you can still put some unaware things into there, not knowing what you had in mind. I really liked this part: “Lara?” He seemed to have caught her off guard with the comment. “I couldn’t understand the stupid thing she was talking about with Python’s Theory or something to do with triangles.”“The Pythagorean Theorem,” Tommy corrected, scratching the back of his head.“Yeah, whatever,” Cat said. She finished her Coke in several long gulps. “Ahhh,” she sighed, rubbed her stomach. “Well, see you later Tommy –” She burped and covered her mouth, her face flushing red with embarrassment. “Too much soda in one go, I guess,” she said and giggled. “Yeah,” Tommy said, eyeing her gurgling tummy. “Well, see you later.” :p Great irony. I really love unaware combined with ironic and sarcastic twists, works so much better together. A great example was of your last story, where the mean protagonist booked a one way trip through Lexis digestive tract herself. I love things like, where a micro lands in a onion dip or glass of liquid, full of rage not reallizing what might happen in a short bit, and then his/her anger/confusion suddenly is disrubted by a loud gurling noise, the character suddenly froze in fear looking up, and a tummy is blocking the heavens, and a giant standing there speaking things like "man Im starving", or "oops, did my stomach learn to speak or something",  or a burp suddenly appears instead and the giant saying something like "eww gross, my digestive isnt that geat lately, also took a nasty dump before" mostly in a conversation with another person, and having a remark of she/him shouldnt eat that much junk food. A great example this this scenario also was your idea of Lexi saying "hope this will help with my digestion" and lifting up the glass. I also would like for example an unaware vore, where one character, maybe even the mean character of the story who shrunk people, ended in a drink or onion dip where Tommy would eat from and unknowingly would send the bad guy of the story to a one wy trip through his bowls. Also am already happy to hear youre planing more stories and a Halloween one too :))