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Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 5:16 PM Title: Carl

Wow hot chapter. I loved the tampon part. What a way to go.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed that part. I'm going to have some vore action in the next one, too.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 5:09 PM Title: Carl

Good stuff.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 4:09 PM Title: Carl

Ahhh! What a surprise :') Well thank you Sir!! Actually I was a little bit upset for that once per week update schedule, so thank you so much for filling in this time shorter. And yay for the upcoming vore chapter! :) I wonder what might happen, really curious already. Maybe the girls will sit with Lexi on the same table even Lexi doesnt want that to at first and wonders where Zack is so long doing on the bathroom not realizing what might happen, and she's giving him a one way trip through her digestive tract, maybe even some ironic conversation of the girl who knows and who put him in Lexis soda maybe. And adding some sarcastic remark on Lexis bowls gurgling knowing the micro would have to listen to this. Maybe even the aware girl tries to extend the moment a little bit by holding Lexi back swallowing by comming up with a conversation. Also Lexi releasing a burp and having a remark of her digestion taking on would be great. Or something totally different :p Thansk again for the shorter update schedule :))



Author's Response:

I won't spoil what's going to happen in the next chapter, but I will said that there will be an ironic conversation that occurs in that chapter for sure. I won't spoil who gets eaten or who eats them, but I will say that somebody's getting a one-way trip to a girl's tummy ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I'll have the chapter up on Sunday.

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 2:40 PM Title: Carl

Nice little build up chapter, and yay, finally some action hopefully taking place next one :p I loved the rude kind of the girls like "Watch it, you fucking loser!" giving some kind of power over the boys especially when they would become ant sized later on. Also love how Lexis stomach always gurgles :p I can imagine one of the girl gang meeting Zack in the bathroom, shrinking him and putting him in the soda of Lexi who would gup him down unknownigly :p Looking toward Sunday so much now. Youre awesome in writing style and building things up. Lots of autors lack that on here.



Author's Response:

I'm happy that your excited for Sunday. I'm working on the chapter as we speak and without giving away too much, Lexi's belly is certainly going to gurgle! Glad you like my writing style and I will make sure to have some good vore for you guys up this weekend.

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