Great way of plot telling as always!! It went different as what I had expected. But this is not much critism, I just dont like "hard vore" what I call it, with lots of food envolved. My favorite vore is always unharmed vore without any chewing, and a medium of liquid like a soda or glass of water/coke, a cereal, onion dip and so on. Im into stuffing too. I like flat tummies more :3 Also I find it more interesting if the stomach isnt much filled with food for the micro to be in. I imagine it more of a giant empty cave, with slimy walls forming digestive drops from the walls and roof. The vore part was really short, I like it more if it's expended especially the part in front of the mouth. Things like the unaware person speaks with someone else, the micro isnt shoved in with the first bite, he/she fell off again and so on. I like the idea of the micro thinking they were saved but then it's all false hope. I love false hope scenarios, also including like "did she/he see me?" "yes yes it's me!! I'm so glad you...", and in mid sentence cut off and the giant just releasing a burp and never noticed the tiny dot, but the micro just thought she/he did, and was just looking "through" the food. What's so awesome is you're plaing to add in a way quicked cycle :)) Thats awesome!! I cant wait for how it continues :)) It's a real killer to wait a few days you know :/ I also liked the ending Tommy not really interesting in the case it seemed lol, and that hes more driven by his teenager boy hormons. I'm so sad you sad you wont include male vore, even if it's just a 2path plot not including 100% of it for him, it would fit so damn great now in here, that Tommy is more interested in his new gf than in the case and is neglecting his friends even. It would be a really ironic and sarcastic twist, that Tommy would gulp down one of his friends and not even knowing about it. Hope for the next chapter already, even if it's tomorrow, maybe youre able to publish it sooner :)) Thanks again for writing <3