Reviews For Snacks
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2014 5:16 PM Title: Love

Loved that one. Was the best so far, wonder whats still to come. Was really enjoyful to read. I was wondering what if it was Autumn all along and she still had Carl in her vagina and Tommy was ramming his dick in her not having a clue, that would had been great.



Author's Response:

Who knows, maybe Carl is still in there... ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I'll reveal the killer in the next chapter on Wednesday!

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2014 2:43 PM Title: Love

Damn site... thanks god I was able to retriev my review by going back in browser history :( Hopefully it will go through this time. Wow, fantastic chapter. I loved the love scene between Tommy and Autumn <3 Actually I hoped for something like this to happen. You left out the tiny little details for the reader to fill in in mind, thats awesome. You have a fantastic telling style. I dont know if it fits in this story, mostly not, but it would be really hot if Autumn was the killer, and Tommy would never know, not knowing what she might do with his friends. Maybe you can put this into another story again, where Tommy had sex with a gf, and a micro or a few gets some really intime friendship time. For example they could be put into a condom, and Tommy would use it without a clue giving the micro a horrible death inside, and throwing the filled condom away carelessly in the rooms bin afterwards. Or a micro of really tiny size, that Tommy would never notice it, like lint size or sand corn size, would be placed on the girls anus, and Tommy would bang her butt. Or he's licking the girls vagina and accidentally and unknowingly licking off a tiny sand corn sized micro who was placed down there. I cant wait for the next chapter. This was truly the best chapter so far, even if it didnt contain any vore or micro parts, it was so damn hot to read!!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! There's one more major sex scene in this story, but I like the idea of Tommy having sex with his gf more often (I'm sure Tommy would to) and maybe even her unknowingly eating someone. Maybe not in this story, but maybe. I mean, we don't know who the killer is yet ;). I hope you enjoy the last few chapters of the story and thanks as always for reviewing!

You must login (register) to review.