Date: September 25 2014 12:05 PM Title: The Shrink Ray
I'm loving this story. That twist at the end of ch 6...can't wait to see what happens! Thank you for taking the time to write this story and sharing it.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm putting up the next chapter right now...
[Report This]Date: September 24 2014 8:13 PM Title: The Shrink Ray
Plot becam really great and hot so far, cant wait for the next chapter and how it's continuing. I am glad to read boy/girl interaction, it's really hot and not much contained in stories, most have just shrinking plots. This is where I like your stories so much. I hope youll continue to write, honestly your stories are one of the best Ive read this year. Keep up the great work!! :) Also amazing cliffhanger at the end.
Author's Response:
Glad your enjoying it and that you liked the plot twist! I worked a lot on the next chapter last night, so I'll definetely have it up this evening!
[Report This]Date: September 24 2014 4:57 PM Title: The Shrink Ray
Ahh!! Awesome chapter <3 I loved the beginning and the ending, the beginning was really hot to read, and the ending was really interesting and a mind twist. So Zack knew about the shrink ray all along, and he was one of the killers too? Both he and Lexi? I really hope Tommy and Autumn survive, please :3 I would love to read a whole story about them, and bad accidents happen mostly caused unknowingly by Tommy, which would be so damn ironic because he was part of the club to protect people, and know his accidental actions would cause some bad luck, especially for his next friends. So I guess Simon will get to know what a one way trip down Lexis digestive tract looks like :3 Really hope youll be able to write out the next chapter soon, even if you wrote beforey youre really busy this week. Awesome plot twist, and I already think this is your best story so far.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the twist! I wasn't sure how that was going to come across. As for the questions said twist raises, all will be explained in the next chapter, which I'll try to have out tomorrow. There's going to be some good unaware vore in it to ;)