Reviewer: zol Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2014 3:01 PM Title: Revelations

The chapter was really gread written, didnt touch me that much as the others though because it was mostly a flachback and everything was mostly known. I am not a hugh fan of flashback, I hate when that happens in a series and it's telling too long. But some parts were also knew so it's still great :3 What I liked was the last sentence, that suddenly Cat appeared I think that was not something to expect. I am so damn curious of how the last chapter will come out, what happens and everything. I really hope Tommy and Autumn survive. Maybe Zack gets somehow too shrunk. It would be funny, if Zack was shrunk to ant size and placed in a "safe" transportation box like a matchbox and Tommy stuffs it in his jeans, and in another story something goes wrong because he tries to escape while being in Tommys or Autumns house, as some kind of side story, but I know that wont happen because you already have written and planed everything. Anyway :) Really hoping for a great final chapter!!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! I hope you enjoyed finally having some unaware in there (guess it was truly an unaware story all along!) and that you liked Zack's comment on the onion dip. I'm still writing the final chapter, but I hope you like it. Until next time...