Date: October 11 2014 11:35 PM Title: Spell 2 - The Fire Sisters
Do a lot of people a huge favor and keep writing this story. Unfortunately it's too late for me to read anymore beyond the second chapter. But I'm really loving this, so much.
I'm really into fantasy genre, I'm in the middle of reading The Wheel Of Time series right now. You pull it off so well it's incredible. You have just the right blend of story telling an eroticism, something I can't pull off. The scenes with the foot action and the mouth play are awesome, and I hope there is a lot more of Thalana's feet.
But at the same time you have a world that is really well established and in depth characters. All in all keep this story going. I can't wait to finish it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, Darien! I tend to take a bit long to write my chapters, but I'm definitely still writing! I personally don't know if what I'm writing actual makes for good erotica, but I always do try to make my stories entertaining, at least. I'm glad it worked out for you! xD I'm in the middle of writing a new chapter, and will most likely have it posted within the week. Please look forward to it!
[Report This]Date: September 16 2014 5:31 AM Title: Spell 2 - The Fire Sisters
John is a really good character himself, but I didn't expect the Sisters to have so much depth to them. I approve this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! It was fun to write for so many dfferent personalities at once :) Glad it worked out!
[Report This]Date: September 16 2014 3:17 AM Title: Spell 2 - The Fire Sisters
Interesting dynamics between the sisters, John is in for a real handful now that he's met all of them.
Author's Response:
He's in for some rough times ahead :)