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Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2014 10:26 PM Title: Spell 3 - The Trigger

Well it certainly helped her, although Thayna will need to learn to control the magic within her, she now has access to more mana than she can manage!



Author's Response:

Hey Nostory :) Thayna's got her work cut out for her with her new power, but at least she's not the lowest pole on the totem any more!

 

Incidentally, I was reading your bio, and I happen to be from the same country as you! Small world :>

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2014 9:28 PM Title: Spell 3 - The Trigger

dammit no joke like near the start of the ch. i figured out the her sorce to her magic mark would be something like love,arousal,or like passion for her feet. good ch.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I figured it'd make for some interesting interactions if Thayna's mark were to be based on arousal, especially if John wasn't there to feed her :) We'll see what trouble they get into

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2014 7:52 PM Title: Spell 3 - The Trigger

A very good chapter! I had a feeling sexual arousal would be Thayna's trigger. I'm really enjoying this story. I would like to see some other giantesses besides the Fire family. And maybe learn a little bit more about Farum. Can't wait to see more.

Author's Response:

Thanks Shrunken Scholar :) I've planned for this story to be an adventure, so John and Thayna will be on their way to explore the world soon! We'll see what they find in their journeys~

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