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Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 9:14 AM Title: Spell 7 - Unkindly Guests

Excellent! The story is going at a good pace, the characters are well rounded, and they have very distinct character development!

I hope to see more chapters in the future!

Author's Response:

Thank you for for your kind words! I always try to keep my stories interesting with my characters, so I'm glad you like it!

 

I update quite infrequently with my current study schedule, but I always try to squeeze in a few words into a new chapter whenever I can! Please look forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2014 7:24 PM Title: Spell 7 - Unkindly Guests

And that's when John died. Silestria not wanting to be embarrassed, never spokd the truth and left Mordrell in silence. Thayna, in a panic for the loss of her not-boyfriend John and enraged by the abuse humans have suffered within the kingdom, confronts the Vampire Mage Queen, and things go sour. Farum and Mordrell go to war, and thousands of people die in the conflict.

Whoops!



Author's Response:

That's totally what's going to happen :p Embroilled in a war of sizes, Thayna becomes a warlord and eventually triumphs over Mordreel. This earns her the nickname 'Vampire Slayer', but just as things were looking up, a portal to another dimension opens and Buffy steps through as a giga and yells, "THERE CAN ONLY BE ONE!" And stomp goes Farum. The end! Thanks for reading guys, I hope you liked how The Magister Gigantique ends! See you in another story!

 

Aha, if only I had the guts to write something like that :)

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