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Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2014 7:00 AM Title: Spell 8 - The Vampire

Sorry, I watched a super sad movie last night and I wasn't paying attention...

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I liked this chapter. It wasn't mindblowing, but it was a good infodump. And characterized Marietta well. The only thing that throws me off is Silestria's treatment of John. Cultural differences are weird.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2014 7:04 AM Title: Spell 8 - The Vampire

Good to see you back and it's quite the chapter, with John, Thayna and our newest character Katie all in seem kind of trouble!

Guess this will all converge in the Crushworks, can't wait to see what you have planned next!



Author's Response:

Thanks Nostory! Good to be back :) Things are definitely heating up in the next chapter. We'll see how the gang deals with things then :)

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