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Reviewer: AbsentStar Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 28 2014 10:00 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual

I like it.  I like it very much.

Reviewer: ADash Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 12:09 AM Title: Lunch Like Usual

My favorite story on this site, and I've been lurking for years. Created an account just to review it!



Author's Response:

:) I plan to make a sequel some time in the future, but I'm working on another series right now if you're interested!

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2014 3:34 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual

This was phenomenally graphic in its description, not just of the eating, but of the thoughts that went through the giantess's mind while leading up to it, and while doing it. Are you into vore yourself, or just writing it for the readers' to fantasize?

Here's something I put on another site, which might change your outlook on one thing you said in this chapter, for the best, I hope. 

https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3036038/1/The-Prayer-Necessities

I loved this line: "I even stuck out my tongue and let him enjoy the view"

Love to chat any time too.

peterthewryter@gmail.com 

 



Author's Response:

I do enjoy vore particularly, but really I like everything about destructive giantesses, so this story was an experiment to write giantess without writing mindless murder. Even I must admit a soft spot for gentle, however. Really everything about giantesses is fascinating. And to answer our question about biting down, it's Jessica being merciful. She knows swallowing them whole would be far more painful and horrifying. It also helps her disassociate them as people... they're more like food when she chews them. 

Reviewer: SGiantess Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2014 6:30 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual

Hey guys! Just a quick announcement about how things have been slowing down quite a bit since I first started this project. I haven't dropped the story but things have been kinda busy so I can't guarantee as fast a release schedule as you might be used to. I'm working on getting Chapter 7 done as soon as possible!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2014 8:55 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual

@gadget, it's a popular name. I've no problems with it myself. 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2014 11:55 AM Title: Lunch Like Usual

@Nostory

Right? Even the name is the same! Also, what is it with people and the name "Jessica" on this site anyway? I come across that name like every 4-5 stories!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2014 10:08 AM Title: Lunch Like Usual

@gadget, that makes this story feel familiar....

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2014 12:44 AM Title: Lunch Like Usual

I actually felt so glad for Jessica to see Dustin again, she now has a reason to stay human. Michael , I hope he is wrong, Jessica must live! She could work out a deal with the world or something!

I'm also wondering how Jessica will react when Michael's lack of faith is revealed.

Reviewer: spencerpill49 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2014 6:14 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual

While I was pretty skeptical going into this story (I am for EVERY story I read here), this is definitely one of the biggest surprises.  The first chapter is good as its own short story, but the way you have elaborated since then and created a greater plot is really cool.  I personally subscribe very little to the "giant destructive woman" aspect and lean more towards "shrunken captive, gentle captor" type stuff, but this story has really drawn me in.  With that said, I am hoping you handle Dustin and Jessica's confrontation well, and I secretly hope that you include some intimacy between them at their size difference.  That would make the middle of this story incredible in my opinion.  Amazing job so far!

Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2014 12:53 AM Title: Lunch Like Usual

Oh my god! oh and not forgetting My Giantess! as well.
This story is captivating and simply brilliant! :)
I have to just share, that as a reader, who is blessed by blindness from birth.
I am often finding stories with a lack of that boundless creaitivity.
Alas, I wish I could write in words, what I am very good at expressing in music.
Please write chapter 4?
Oh and for the record? nobody can hide from a hungry giantess in a dark alley, like a well trained blind chocolate-bar

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2014 7:00 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual

  Goodness, she's losing it. Maybe what she needs is a human touch, spend some time with a person she isn't going to eat, someone who can reach out and show her she doesn't have to live like a monster. 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2014 11:35 AM Title: Lunch Like Usual

Great chapter! It looks like shes going insane...reminds me of Smeagol from lord of the rings with the good and evil personalities that argue back and forth.

Reviewer: snuffle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2014 9:07 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual

Holy crizzap! Great, well-written fleshed out story; fetish or otherwise. Despite its fantastic subject matter it is fairly believable. Very well grounded! Normally i find innocence troublesome in a giantess but her reluctant carnage makes strangely horrifying and erotic. Love the cryptid hunter too. You have 2 compelling characters where most giantess tales struggle to establish even one. EXCELSIOR! I HEREBY AWARD YOU ALL THE STARS! ...NOW TAWLK ABOUT HER BUTT! lol. but really great so far.          sincerely your pal and mine, me

 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2014 1:27 AM Title: Lunch Like Usual

I like the perspective shift but I hope you stick to the gts point of view mostly. Shes a really interesting character and the little monologues that run through her head make it a blast to read! One thing I found odd about the gts's character is why she wouldn't turn to prisons for nourishment instead of feeding on innocents. I mean its obvious she wants to try to keep death and chaos at a minimum and she feels really bad about having to eat innocent people...so why not eat convicted rapists, murders, etc, instead? Just a thought.

Reviewer: licksquid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2014 8:41 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual

That's definitely a road less travelled. I want to see more of it.

Reviewer: desslok Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2014 8:46 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual

How good is this story by this site's standards? Really goddamed brilliant. You really expressed the emotion and trauma going on in her head, a side of the genre not often seen.

 

Plus there's all kinds of directions this story could go. A slow loss of humanity (and a recovery from the brink), accidental bonding with a 'victim', something from the victim's point of view, coming to terms with her basic needs. Hell, even just day to day existance beyond the need to eat would be awesome.

Reviewer: Kusanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2014 1:29 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual

I rather enjoyed this seeing genuine conflict and remorse rather than 'I'm big so I'll kill you all lolz.' Don't know if you'll continue it but I'd be happy to read more.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2014 8:25 AM Title: Lunch Like Usual

I'm not a vore guy in the least bit, but I think this was very experimental and well written. I don't think I'll continue reading, but I thought it was really good anyway.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 10:28 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual

I find it odd that this kind of story isn't written about more often...I really doubt that EVERY woman would turn into a sadistic, cruel monster if turned into a giantess. This kind of giantess is something I haven't really seen on this site.

Either the giantess loves killing and eating people or she's a saint. The giantess in this story is probably the closest to how MOST decent people would act in that position: "I need to eat to survive I'm not gonna just go around crushing and killing for no good reason either."

I'm really enjoying this so far!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 9:29 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual

You know, this is good enough to continue. I am really curious to learn more about this giantess.

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