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Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2014 3:38 PM Title: Pursuing the Beast

And now we have the man's POV.

"She's on all the Channels" could be funny. Maybe she's bigger than all the station buildings. 

One thing I wondered about chapter 1. If she was 600 feet tall, why would she have bitten down on the businessman? Wouldn't he have easily gone down whole?

Reviewer: Kusanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2014 6:54 AM Title: Pursuing the Beast

I thought she had gone well beyond her ten in the previous chapter but couldn't tell if it was deliberate or in error. Nice to see that talked about here. She may have been driven mad in her hunger to the point where she may not stop.

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