[Report This]Date: October 14 2014 4:14 PM Title: Chained
Wow she is truly and irrevocably fucked. The prison was nothing more then an excuse for her to eat people guilt free. Wonder if aliens are to blame for her size as an act of war towards mankind... Unlikely but seems the only explanation I could think of besides it being a dream or virtual reality or something... I mean why else is the taste of people so delicious for her? Almost like she's starting to rely on instinct and lose all that made her human. I'm hoping she finds out about guy's(forgot his name) infidelity. Also when will she find her parents if they live? And will she use her "boyfriend" for her pleasure, without killing him and also hope she finds said boyfriends new girlfriend.
Anyways awesome story and I really liked the part with the prison. Can't wait to see more from you.
aaron
[Report This]Date: October 14 2014 1:23 PM Title: Chained
I guess thats it then. Its clear that shes not right in the head anymore. Firstly, even if human tastes better to her if she really cared shed suck it up and eat animals instead..But more importantly, when she arrived at the prison she ate guards and prisoners alike!
And what happened to her 10 people rule? A prison has a lot more people than that! I guess Dustin is right she needs to die. I kinda find it odd that the military hasnt engaged her yet with the big guns, I think that even if she were a gentle gts that prolly woulda happened by now. Good story though, Im not as sympathetic towards Jess after this chapter but im still looking forward to more!
Date: October 14 2014 11:10 AM Title: Chained
Glad to see you're back, now for the review.
I should point all of this is from Michael's point of view which mixes all of it with his fear of Jessica eating him so we might need to hear from Jessica's side to further understand everything that is going on.
Having said that, I find myself agreeing with him that Jessica really needs to die. She seems to be getting off on their deaths, it is more than sustenance now. I really wish it hadn't come to this but this is what you seem to be building to.
Eating prisoners is still eating people I agree but the least evil thing she could do would be to eat people on death row because lets be honest here, there is a different level of severity to each crime and a rapist is not the same as say...a con artist. I would not be against Jessica eating a murderer or a rapist but those in on more minor crimes don't deserve it.
Maybe...just maybe there is a compromise but that is looking very unlikely right now.
Date: October 09 2014 6:30 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual
Hey guys! Just a quick announcement about how things have been slowing down quite a bit since I first started this project. I haven't dropped the story but things have been kinda busy so I can't guarantee as fast a release schedule as you might be used to. I'm working on getting Chapter 7 done as soon as possible!
Date: October 05 2014 8:55 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual
@gadget, it's a popular name. I've no problems with it myself.
Date: October 05 2014 11:55 AM Title: Lunch Like Usual
@Nostory
Right? Even the name is the same! Also, what is it with people and the name "Jessica" on this site anyway? I come across that name like every 4-5 stories!
Date: October 05 2014 10:08 AM Title: Lunch Like Usual
@gadget, that makes this story feel familiar....
Date: October 05 2014 1:55 AM Title: Love and Death
It's hard to feel bad for Jessica when she has so much blood on her hands...But part of this is NOT her fault...Part of it..
I think it IS her fault in a way because really she could have found another food source. Like I said before, turn to prisons, or go to a forest and find animals to eat...
Or maybe she could eat trees? Go vegetarian? I don't know, I kinda feel like she turned to eating people a little too quickly, so I think some of the blame DOES fall onto her.
But I'm really excited to see where things go from here. Maybe there can be some understanding between her and normal humans.
If there was more communication between both parties, there could be something set up to feed the giantess without resorting to people...
Date: October 05 2014 12:44 AM Title: Lunch Like Usual
I actually felt so glad for Jessica to see Dustin again, she now has a reason to stay human. Michael , I hope he is wrong, Jessica must live! She could work out a deal with the world or something!
I'm also wondering how Jessica will react when Michael's lack of faith is revealed.
[Report This]Date: October 02 2014 6:14 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual
While I was pretty skeptical going into this story (I am for EVERY story I read here), this is definitely one of the biggest surprises. The first chapter is good as its own short story, but the way you have elaborated since then and created a greater plot is really cool. I personally subscribe very little to the "giant destructive woman" aspect and lean more towards "shrunken captive, gentle captor" type stuff, but this story has really drawn me in. With that said, I am hoping you handle Dustin and Jessica's confrontation well, and I secretly hope that you include some intimacy between them at their size difference. That would make the middle of this story incredible in my opinion. Amazing job so far!
[Report This]Date: October 02 2014 4:43 PM Title: Dustin's Peril
Really like how Dustin and Michael are working together now. I personally think that she will be glad to see him. At least that's what I've gathered from previous chapters, she didn't seem to wish him any ill will. I really like how you've written Jessica's character, she's a monster yet is still human. I originally was hoping either Dustin or Jessica's parents would be able to 'bring her back' but unfortunately it doesn't look like the story is headed in that direction. Which is cool :) you're an amazing writer.
aaron
Date: October 02 2014 8:41 AM Title: Dustin's Peril
I really cannot wait to see how Dustin and Jessica will react to each other, Jessica will be sl glad to see him!
[Report This]Date: September 30 2014 11:15 PM Title: Awakening
I dont know what it is about this story that just pulls me in but I can't seem to stop reading. Fantastic job. I live this story. And I normally hate vore type stuff.
Finally know her name and her boyfriend. This is shaping up quite nicely. Can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
Date: September 30 2014 9:37 PM Title: Awakening
Jessica is a nice name. Dustin Hoffins? Is he related to Dustin Hoffman.
I get why he won't even want to come near Jessica, she will likely be hurting and if there is one person she'd want to eat, it'll be him. However, he can offer her a way out, a way to avoid the bomb.
[Report This]Date: September 30 2014 11:15 AM Title: Nightmare
These are my favourite types of giantess stories - where the protagonist is doing something novel or giving a perspective into their thought process.
[Report This]Date: September 30 2014 12:53 AM Title: Lunch Like Usual
Oh my god! oh and not forgetting My Giantess! as well.
This story is captivating and simply brilliant! :)
I have to just share, that as a reader, who is blessed by blindness from birth.
I am often finding stories with a lack of that boundless creaitivity.
Alas, I wish I could write in words, what I am very good at expressing in music.
Please write chapter 4?
Oh and for the record? nobody can hide from a hungry giantess in a dark alley, like a well trained blind chocolate-bar
Date: September 29 2014 7:00 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual
Goodness, she's losing it. Maybe what she needs is a human touch, spend some time with a person she isn't going to eat, someone who can reach out and show her she doesn't have to live like a monster.
Date: September 29 2014 11:35 AM Title: Lunch Like Usual
Great chapter! It looks like shes going insane...reminds me of Smeagol from lord of the rings with the good and evil personalities that argue back and forth.
[Report This]Date: September 28 2014 9:07 PM Title: Lunch Like Usual
Holy crizzap! Great, well-written fleshed out story; fetish or otherwise. Despite its fantastic subject matter it is fairly believable. Very well grounded! Normally i find innocence troublesome in a giantess but her reluctant carnage makes strangely horrifying and erotic. Love the cryptid hunter too. You have 2 compelling characters where most giantess tales struggle to establish even one. EXCELSIOR! I HEREBY AWARD YOU ALL THE STARS! ...NOW TAWLK ABOUT HER BUTT! lol. but really great so far. sincerely your pal and mine, me
[Report This]Date: September 28 2014 6:54 AM Title: Pursuing the Beast
I thought she had gone well beyond her ten in the previous chapter but couldn't tell if it was deliberate or in error. Nice to see that talked about here. She may have been driven mad in her hunger to the point where she may not stop.