[Report This]Date: November 12 2014 10:18 PM Title: Ground Zero
I meant to write a review for this story after I first read it, but I never had the oppertunity until now that it's come to it's conclusion.
I was sad to see this story end what seemed to be a bit abruptly, but it was enjoyable none the less. :) I'm not very good at critiques or anything like that so I won't bother try, suffice it to say there were a lot of aspects to the story as a whole that I enjoyed both for it's erotic nature and the underlying plotline.
I hope you end up continuing with a sequel of some sort, I think you left enough things open for that to happen. :)
[Report This]Date: November 12 2014 7:27 PM Title: Ground Zero
One of the best stories on here!! PLEASE write a sequel!! You did the ass perfect!! I want more of this story!! Write about finding a cure!! This HAS to continue! Please and add just as much butt if not more buttaction as this one has!! 11 out of 10 in my book!
Date: November 12 2014 5:45 PM Title: Ground Zero
nice series! i can't wait for your next work =)
[Report This]Date: October 20 2014 8:23 PM Title: Ground Zero
Wow, this is a really good unaware story! I like how you incorporate both the views of the shrunk people and the regular size folks. I like butt, boobs, and unaware and you do a perfect job showing all of them. A+, I'll be looking forward to more!
[Report This]Date: October 19 2014 8:58 AM Title: Ground Zero
i thought it was amazingly written and id love to see where you take this story to next
[Report This]Date: October 19 2014 8:57 AM Title: Ground Zero
i thought it was amazingly written and id love to see where you take this story to next
[Report This]Date: October 17 2014 9:27 AM Title: Ground Zero
I liked it, and am patiently awaiting the feet parts!
[Report This]Date: October 17 2014 12:46 AM Title: Ground Zero
Hahaha, niiiiice. This day keeps getting better and better, a new favorite author. And this is your first story, too? Damn. I love it so far! Really good descriptions, especially that toilet scene. I'm a bit of a toilet connoiseur, and this is one of my faves. Impressive work.
I do have to concur with Toku, I wish the gum scene had been described a bit more. Seeing what you could do, it would have been interesting to see. The butt crush was also well done, but nothing beats Paul's fate. I do hope you do some more butt stuff, but I'm selfish, haha.
I can't wait for the next chapter! Was I reading the end note right, have you already finished them? If so, put them all up! It'd be a real shame for this to be lost like so many other great stories, forgotten in the underbelly of an old computer. :P
[Report This]Date: October 16 2014 7:44 PM Title: Ground Zero
Superb!
Love what you've got so far. I'm not sure how you're going to continue, since the police coming and whatnot probably means the end of the fun, but I'll trust you on this, haha.
Loved the unaware fates of the shrunk characters so far. I kinda wish the first girl's struggling in the tissue and gum could have been continued, but im a sucker for bodily fluids stuff. Similarly it wouldve been nice for me for the brother to have remained attached to his unaware sister a little longer.
Loojing forward to the next part - keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. Much appreciated.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2014 5:18 PM Title: Ground Zero
This story is one of the best stories on here that I have read!! And I love how long it is!! And I love the amout of butt action you have included in it!! And everything butt related! Lol... Anyways yes please keep this story coming!! Keep it long and detailed.... Don't forget to add more butt stuff as much as possible lol!! And keep one shrunk person a main character if possible without killing them. Please don't quit this story... Il be on tomorrow to check to see if chapter 2 is up :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. As for the next chapter, I'm a little short on time right now and will probably post it on Monday.
Date: October 16 2014 7:17 AM Title: Ground Zero
You did a very good job on this one. It's a nice story and I thinks it's well written. I myself would love to see how this will going on so it leaves just one thing to say. Keep it on! ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Nice to see people are reading my stuff.