[Report This]Date: October 25 2014 4:03 PM Title: Investigation
One of the best chapters Ive read in a long time. Just amazing man. Awesome length and details, great pov switches. Perfect telling style, grammer, tenses, everything is perfect. Loved the events towards the end. The idea that one of two best friends get involved, one shrunk to ant size, and the other making out with a girl and the micro gets in "between" them always was one of my favorite concepts. Id love if Paul gets accidentally swallowed by his best friend, or if they do anal and he gets inserted on their 2nd play through. Really amazing story, loved your vore and digestion hints, a lot of authors dont ever write out what happens after the stomach, mostly not even know how digestion works, what the small intestine does, what the large one does, and never do the aftermaths. Cant wait for the next chapter. Hope it stays unaware and the same style, amazing story!