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Reviewer: lfcfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2014 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nicely done! I'd definitely want to read on.

One thing though, the tense of the story changes from past to present and back a few times, which is a bit confusing. Othewise, I hope you'll write more.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2014 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

 I enjoyed it more than I thought I would. Well done.

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