Reviewer: dood07 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2014 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 8

@tinyguy, yeap, it could also go on like this ! :D It would only be so sad for the girl who's in love with the other girl, if the other girl hasn't got any romantic feeling towards her... :S

A very great chapter ! It's a little hard for me to read, I found your vocabular a little bit..sophisticated maybe ? Anyway, I think you get the idea.. ^^ It's only to tell you to keep on writting like this, all the expressions, feelings, actions.. of the characters are pretty explained and it gives us a good picture of the story and what's happening at every moment. We see into the characters like we were here, and it gives a very living dimension at your story :)

Like I've already said, Eva's hate towards herself is so...amazing !! Usually, with a plot like this one, it should be the mini who would be sad and angry with the current situation, but no ! It's the giant one who hates herself and not Headley, she hates the society, the human nature and everything that composes her world... Yeap, anyhing more to say, it's very beautiful... 

I'll tell you, the wait is worth it ! So please, please, please, keep on like this ! I'm already waiting for the next chapter, good luck like always ! :D

Author's Response:

I forget sometimes that your first language is not English. You do write rather well!

I am glad you are enjoying Eva's character. I feel like she is human - that romantasized notion we have of what it means to be human. 

I am glad the wait did not kill anyone, lol!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15 2014 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 8

I liked the scene with Jazeera and Hadley, it shows Hadley helping her host family and she isn't so helpless at all ,a more balanced relationship that isn't totally one way at all, its pretty good. 

 

Author's Response:

Hadley may be small, but she has got it together! Thanks for reviewing!