[Report This]Date: September 11 2015 1:48 PM Title: Sips and Giggles
Mmmh.. A few months since you haven't received any review on this story, and I'm wondering if this may be the reason it hadn't been updated so far...? O.o
Anyway ! Since you told it's part of what makes you continue to write (and I perfectly understand you :D) and since I loooved this story so far, I'm writing you this review !
You know I'm not that strong in writing and speaking english, but you have got also to know that what you made is purely wonderful. The suicide being an awesome theme to... hum how should I call it... a mentalistic story. Do you understand what I mean ? A story that focusses on the mental aspects of the protagonists, and your way to describe all these and how you make these evolve since the beginning... Really, it is awesome. (you know the last story I wrote is also about suicide, this is just to tell that this special subject is really interesting for me, "artistically" speaking)
Her playfulness was really enjoyable, and I want you to know that it made me smile multiple times while I was in the metro; maybe I have been considered as a silly reader, but I don't care at all : I enjoyed your story the most I could.
Sure, all the serious stuff is still to come, and I'm already sad for the part when she'll tell him about her lies, but I also know that this will be ultra interesting :) And I'm dreading to discover how he'll react... Will he stay as passive as he is most of the time ? Or will he be angered against her ? Will he cry, shout ? Maybe will he try to end his days, by jumping out of where he's standing when learning this ?
I don't know, and I'm at the same time waiting to discover it and refusing to let it come, because playful like they are now... This just gets me crazy. I loved how they cuddled to sleep, the way she's calling him "cutie", the way she uses her feet to play with him... Hell, I even love the way her room is messy ! You really made her adorable.. :3
And, hum... You know I'm really waiting for the next chapters since this afternoon, and... If you could please continue it it would be awesome. :3
In fact I would also be interested to translate it in French, maybe we'll talk about it later if you're ok with this idea, but I swear I'm so liking this story so far.. The only problem is that it isn't finished yet, and I don't want to attack a project I risk not to achieve..
Anyway, you've only got to know that your story is really really beautiful, and I'm truly looking for more..
Thank you for sharing this with us, and have a good continuation :)
ThelittleFrench
PS : the way she called her breasts "bags of fat", it was so hilarious !! I swear when I understood what was meant by these words (yeah because the time it took me to translate the words in my mind and the time I made the rapprochement, because you didn't speak about breasts before writing this few words ^^), it made me laugh ^^
Author's Response:
I'm going to be honest. I'm the most critical of my writing with this story. I've countlessly rewritten the upcoming chapters, and I'm still not satisfied with what I have. I've been favoring Junebug with updates because that story kinda wrote itself, so to speak. Even for that story I had to constantly rework certain things.
I definitely do appreciate the kind words, and I'm going to continue this story. It's a story I'm in love with writing but it takes a lot to get it right for me. What I have now is actually a bit different than what I originally outlined, so I'm going to keep refining the story behind the scenes first before I continue updating.
I'm really sorry for the long wait, but trust me I'm doing it for good reasons. These two are too fun together to give up on.
[Report This]Date: April 06 2015 11:43 PM Title: 11:11
Great writer. Liking your stories. Please continue them.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'll definitely keep on writing. It's been my favorite thing to do for a while now.
[Report This]Date: March 13 2015 1:53 AM Title: Sips and Giggles
Wow...
The last part nearly got me. I didnt expect to go on this website and get something so suspenseful. I almost forgot this was a fetish story lol.
Good story so far. The chemistry between the characters are quite astounding on top of being really adorable. I'm looking forward to what you have planned next! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I often ask myself whether this is a giantess story or a story with a giantess. You get what I'm saying? My focus on this story has been to develop the characters and the story first and the giantess content would work itself out in the context of the story. Thanks for reviewing. I definitely appreciate it.
Date: March 10 2015 5:17 PM Title: Sips and Giggles
This is superb. I like the way you incorporate fetish content into an actual believeable story that has depth! I'm secretly hoping annie gets a little more into her feet!
Author's Response:
For this story at least, I'm trying to keep the fetish content in the backseat to the story and characters without going over the top, so it's super cool that it feels naturally placed in there. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2015 3:21 PM Title: 11:11
Really good chapter, keeper up!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I was so worried that this chapter wasn't going to be taken all that well/
[Report This]Date: December 30 2014 10:18 PM Title: Sips and Giggles
Depends but not normally. Thanks for providing such an entertaining read.
Also thanks for the quick reply.
aaron
Author's Response:
Hey thanks, I really appreciate that you're keeping up with this story.
Date: December 30 2014 12:35 PM Title: Sips and Giggles
I agree that there should not be a "horny giantess" theme in this story, but there needs to be a real conflict between Annie and Josh. "Rehabilitation" is supposed to be difficult with lots of rules and punishments for disobedience. Annie shrank Josh for his own good in order to save his life not just to play games. She needs to dominate and control him until his resistance is broken. Eventually through "carrots and sticks" Josh should realize that he is better off under Annie's rules and protection.
Author's Response:
Trust me there will be conflict, but it'll take some time. As for dominating and breaking Josh, I don't think it will go that far, but I also won't say much. I want this story to be slow and explore the two of them since they're just kids figuring the situation out. If I wanted this story to end with no conflict, I'd cut it here, but there's more to come. Just think of this as the end of the first act/exposition. Thanks for the suggestions though. That input is definitely something I'll keep my mind on while I write.
[Report This]Date: December 30 2014 3:26 AM Title: Run
Really liking these two characters. Also the playful gentleness of Annie is a welcomed change around these parts.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks! I take it that playful/gentle isn't too common of a theme here.
[Report This]Date: December 29 2014 1:45 PM Title: Run
Really loved the chapter! I think playing little stupid games like this that take advantage of their size difference really spices things up! And I'm glad you haven't gone the: "horny giantess" route yet...Most stories can't wait to turn their giantesses into violent horny bitches just for the sake of having smut.
Author's Response:
I can do that!? Well then... Nah, I'm kidding. I spent 5 chapters of development just to get Josh to crack a joke and smile. Imagine how long it'll take to bring sex into this. All jokes aside, there won't be any smut in the story, and if I do go down that slope, I'll probably make sure there's a natural lead up toit. Anyway, thanks for reviewing!
Date: November 20 2014 11:16 AM Title: Sips and Giggles
I just love how this all connects, Josh's mental instablity, and desire to be loved, even cared for by Annie, and Annie's rash decision to shrink him down. It seems that this dynamic will be quite interesting.
Josh, being dependant on Annie for mental stability
Annie, finally having Josh in the palm of her hand.
Excited to keep reading!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I was hoping that I got their motives across without being too heavy handed about it. I'm definitely loving the dynamic between Josh and Annie.
Date: November 20 2014 10:10 AM Title: Was it Worth It?
This is some very solid stuff. The idea feels original, and the balance of Josh's emotional vulnerability weighed against his new physical vulernability adds a lot of good tension. The character personalities are well-illustrated as well. Keep it up.
P.S. Not to be a nitpicker, but I'm guessing the potective in the story summary is supposed to be protective?
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks! It really cool to know that you like it. It definitely means a lot. Really glad to know the characters are effective. Characters seem to be the backbone of my stories.
Also yes, that was supposed to be protective. Fixed it.
[Report This]Date: November 20 2014 2:34 AM Title: Was it Worth It?
First off, I'm glad that nothing was rushed. There was a lot of detail.
The mother, Heather, sounds very comfortable to talk to. She would make a good counselor. I wonder will her reaction be when she sees Josh.
I thought it was interesting how Josh was on some T-shirts instead of some underwear. That's not a bad thing. It tells me that you value story first and sexy stuff second. I think it's fits great with this story.
1 inch tall is very small. Most stories have like 3-6 inch tall men. But this isn't most stories. This is a one of a kind masterpiece in the making. (Ok, I'm probably exaggerating a bit).
But I really enjoy this story and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Heather's pretty fun to write with what I've got so far. She has to kinda be super approachable to her already independent daughter since Annie's the one people usually come to for help.
I probably would have never even considered panties as an option, especially since sex would probably be the last thing in either Josh or Annie's minds. As for Josh being an inch tall, it makes him a lot more helpless and dependent on Annie. Anyways, I'm really glad you're liking this story, and thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: November 20 2014 1:58 AM Title: Sips and Giggles
Not gonna lie, I was a little disapointed that we didn't get to see much of Josh's awakening into his tiny self, and Annie as a giantess this chapter. But at least the Annie got a bit of characterization and we got to see her state of mind after the choice she made. Overall, it was a good chapter, but what I'm really looking forward to is in the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I can see what you're getting at. I'd feel the same, but I felt it was necessary to get a closer look at both Josh and Annie's psyche and introduce Annie's mom, but I'm still glad you enjoyed this chapter though. I promise that the next one will have what you're looking for.
Date: November 15 2014 7:46 AM Title: Sips and Giggles
Excellent story! However, at 1 inch tall, isn't Josh more vulnerable than ever? There are still thousands of ways that Josh could kill himself or be killed at this height. If Annie wanted to protect him from himself, she would have to cage him or attach / immobolize him to her body. For his own good, she would have to take him with her everywhere.
Author's Response:
Oh yeah definitely. Annie never really thought this through the second the idea embedded itself in her mind. She's the kind of person to be calm most of the time, but when something hits her the wrong way, she can't help but make bad decisions out of passion. And yeah, Josh's vulnerability is definitely going to be addressed soon. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: November 15 2014 2:51 AM Title: Level Headed and Cool
Please team up with someone and make this into a movie, because this writing is beautiful!
The words and dialogue are painting an amazing picture of this tale.
Most people tend to rush the character development, but you thought it through.
Keep it up. I will definitely continue to read this.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks! I don't know if it'll work as a movie, but it's an interesting idea. I spend an obsessive amount of time figuring out everything about my characters, so I have an entire arsenal of things to touch on when I write, makes it a lot easier actually. Really appreciate those nice words, dude thanks.
Date: November 14 2014 3:51 PM Title: Sips and Giggles
Wow, this is an amazing story. Your storytelling abilities are absolutely incredible. Already the characters seem alive, and I cant wait until we get to see Josh's reaction. Fantastic story you have here. :)
Author's Response:
Oh man, thanks a ton. I get really anxious when I post a new story, but hearing this really makes it worth it. I'll be focusing on Josh's view a bit more really soon though.
[Report This]Date: November 14 2014 1:27 AM Title: Level Headed and Cool
I love the reason for why she shrunk him. This is also written very well and I can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks! It's really nice to know that. It makes me feel a lot more confident when I'm writing.
Date: November 13 2014 5:22 PM Title: Sips and Giggles
Really good start! I await to see where things go from here!
Author's Response:
I was actually pretty nervous that people weren't going to like it because of the subject matter,so I'm so glad you're looking this story.
[Report This]Date: November 13 2014 2:00 PM Title: Sips and Giggles
Seems like a pretty good start!
Author's Response:
Thanks! It takes a lot of stress off me to know that people are liking it so far.