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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2015 4:01 PM Title: Not this again!

Good story so far, and really sexy. Sabrina is a somewhat scary character though, its obvious shes trying to gain everything that Mr.West owns at the expense of his life. Its sad if you think about it...And to be honest, this character archetype generally sees their prey as a means to an end and will coldly dispose of them when they cease to be useful. Is Sabrina really going to take care of him forever? Because releasing him is out of the question so what options does that leave? Killing him when shes done, pretty much. Im hoping it doesn't come to that but Sabrina is like a succubus and i doubt she even cares about Mr.West. Maybe im just seeing the worst in people, im eager for the next chapter, this story is really good so far!

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2015 8:12 AM Title: Not this again!

This story is amazing. I really like the playfulness in it. Is it going to be a longer story? If not then it should.

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