Date: January 17 2015 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 November 16th, 2257, 5 weeks before 'present day'
Killing of the lead character is a tricky thing to do and doesn't always succeed. Often with the loss of your audience. For the most part the story was from his perspective and it was shocking to have his life end so abruptly. I had assumed, probably wrongly, that this was going to be a story about eventual reconciliation between the genders or defeat of the giantesses. It appears that things are going to get much worse and may never get better for the normal people. As a result of all the above mentioned things, I've lost interest in this story. I may check back from time to time to see if you've taken this in another direction. I won't rate this as I've little interest in hopelessly violent stories and don't want to contaminate the ratings with my bias.
Author's Response:
I am no fan of spoiling my story, but in this case I can make an exception. He'll return. I am not going to further spoil it, and I truly hope that that is enough to keep you around ! Thanks for the comment.
[Report This]Date: December 16 2014 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 1 November 16th, 2257, 5 weeks before 'present day'
Keep writing,
I would like to see this story go on. :)
Date: December 15 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 November 16th, 2257, 5 weeks before 'present day'
This has been one of my favorite chapters. Please keep doing chapters like these (POV switches and everyday life for the giantesses). They are great.
Author's Response:
Thanks, that's some useful feedback. I'll make sure to use the POV switches