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Reviewer: TheSmitty Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 28 2016 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 11 - The Pleasure is all Hers

Thanks for reviving this story. I love the unaware/mistake for bug moments with Kiana!

Keep up the good work - TheSmitty



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're liking this story! Yeah, there's something really appealing about those "almost recognized but not quite" or "mistaken identity" scenarios. And anything that's unaware is great in my book. Thanks again!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2016 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Pleasure is all Hers

Yes! Almost exactly like my suggestion. I was hopping he gets stuck to her panties at the end throughout the night, haha.

Such a steamy chapter, and I loved it. Kiana is so good at being sexy in unaware scenes that if I was Zack, I would just stay with Kiana. I would even just stay stuck to her panties, haha.

What a great chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: You know, I probably would have just stayed with Kiana too. Zack does want to continue living a normal life though, so he must press on! As for Kiana, it's really fun to write chapters about her. I love her!

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