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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2016 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 13 - The Fateful Morning

Wow! Finally.

Now that's a lot of work just to get their attention.

Now we got 2 possibilities: either she tried to save him, or torture him. (To be honest, I prefer the second option.)

If she saves him, she has to get Julia to unshrink him and I think Erica is nice enough to do that. However, let's not forget that Zack lost his voice. It should be interesting to see how they communicate.

Now what I hope to see is some torture. Imagine Erica looking at Zack in disgust and believes everything that Julia said so Erica believes that Zack was the true villian. Not to mention that Zack can't argue back since he lost his voice. I hope Erica just decides to sneak up on Kiana and drop him inside Kiana's underwear. Hehe.

Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Again, you continue to give out some truly amazing ideas! The next chapter is the finale, so I hope it lives up to your expectations! I'm expecting you to be rather surprised...

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