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Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2020 2:20 AM Title: Episode 4...Living in the Past

Ok wow!

I have been meaning to read this story for awhile now and was looking for a good chapter to start on (I sometimes read non-linear if the story contains oneshot chapters)

And this one just hooked me!

The sexual content and description was done so well, and the time travel aspect!! 

The fact that Danielle unknowingly 'caused' her parents death like that, her presence set off a time loop that will repeat itself over and over again.

That was such a great plot aspect you worked in, and knowing young Danielle is going to grow up and go through it (while fucked up that her dad and mom do that to her) makes their reaction right at the end to discovering the truth all the more satisfying.

Why does this chapter not have more reviews, hell why doesn't this story have more reviews??!?!

I am definitely going to read more of this, fantastic work. 

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2018 5:57 PM Title: Episode 1...The Apprentice pt 1

I really like the concept of the apprentice series, that there is a race of immortal, beautiful women with magic powers who live in secret and shrink people for pleasure and food.

Reviewer: ADash Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 29 2016 11:29 PM Title: Episode 1...The Apprentice pt 1

Great stories, very entertaining to read! Your episodic storytelling is well done, I love that each one is unique and sexy in its own way. The only complaint I could bring up is, there are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes that could be caught by an editor or a proof-reader. I'll do it for you, if you'd like :)

Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2016 10:22 AM Title: Episode 2...Going Retro

These are really good! I'm loving this! 😁

Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2016 1:38 PM Title: Episode 1...The Apprentice pt 2

This was surprisingly well written! I enjoyed this first short. I'll continue onto the next!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2015 1:50 AM Title: Episode 1...The Apprentice pt 1

Penny could have lied about it, declared the zone too dangerous for human ships and cordoned off the area or simply just cancelled the distress signal.

Her decision not to return would just draw more people in to look for their missing member and then it'll be hell to pay .



Author's Response:

Well she could've lied about it but the army knew mythrilite was there (because of the probes) so that wouldn't work. She could've just not sent the distress call. The reason I had her shoot it was the same reason Cortez burned his ships when he reached the New World and gave her a better incentive to make a new life.

 

Her disappearance would have been understandable during a time of war. They would have simply written her off as MIA (presumed destroyed by the enemy) and unlikely used valuable resources to look for her. But you never know.... :)

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 5:05 AM Title: Episode 8...Nature or Nurture Pt. 2

For once, a happy ending with no strings attached. I am touched by it, Nathan and Clarissa really deserve each other, him for averting a disaster and reaching out to a lonely and broken teenager and turned her into a force of good. 

 

You really outdid yourself this  time, keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it :)I had to remember nor all twilight episodes ended with a horror filled ending.

Reviewer: lazyb Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2015 1:15 AM Title: Episode 7...The Collector

WOW!!! Good read.  Hope you get your stuff put on a screen!!! I love a good horror story!

HUGS and keep up the good work!!! Yours curtis



Author's Response:

Thanks bro!

Reviewer: io1908 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 10 2015 8:10 AM Title: Episode 1...The Apprentice pt 1

This story is great so far, well done! I hope you didn't run out of inspiration as it seems such a promissing story

Author's Response: Oh I haven't run out of inspiration yet! In fact I plan to revisit my first episode for season 2!

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2015 5:05 PM Title: Episode 1...The Apprentice pt 1

I have only read the first chapter, so forgive me if this review is a bit premature.

First off I must say that this is very well written, plenty of rich details that use a wide range of vocabulary. I also enjoyed the teacher/ student angle which was a good change of pace from the usual style around here. The dialogue between them in particular was a treat to read.

Which brings me to my one and only complaint which is that dialogue between characters is usually separated by paragraph to make it easier on the reader.

All and all a pleasant reading experience

 

 



Author's Response: I get what you're saying about the dialogue. It would work if my stories were short but they're not. If I did it that way the page count would be massive. At first I considered two styles of how to handle dialog. One is that way and the other is what I do now. That's why I end dialogue with he said she said etc. thanks for the review and I'm glad you're enjoying the story :)

Reviewer: etz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2015 1:22 PM Title: Episode 1...The Apprentice pt 1

This is a good story, and here I am thinking I runs out of good sexy fiction to read :3c



Author's Response: Glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: Size Master Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2015 4:19 PM Title: Episode 1...The Apprentice pt 1

Thanks for the review. Writing episodic is very different to what I did in the past. When I look back at invasion I'm blown away at how many pages I wrote. I could literally fill a novel with it. Standalone episodes are hard! I think many people like stories and just feel shy about writing a review. (I'm guilty of it too ^_^). The next episode will drop sometime tonight so get ready!

Reviewer: xmandavid Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2015 9:12 PM Title: Episode 1...The Apprentice pt 1

Wow.. Still no reviews

Well I just wanted to say that was a great story, I could see its resemblance with The Twilight Zone. Well done .

I usually don't leave reviews, but seeing zero I just had to write one

Hope to see more of you in the future.

-xman

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