Date: May 16 2015 10:16 PM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
Hope I can read the new chapters soon
Date: May 13 2015 3:39 AM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
I've never really considered myself as being interested in transformation, but this story has gone a long way in converting me. I like the dynamic between the two characters, although I feel your writing style can use a little more polishing (which could easily be honed with me writing). You're clearly very talented.
I agree with another reviewer about the protagonist being transformed into food. Keep up the great work, and thanks for a wonderful read!
Date: May 11 2015 10:48 PM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
wow~ I love transform stories very much, and what about to tf into foods next time as the pubishment? :)
I hope to see the next chapter really soon!
Date: May 11 2015 10:28 PM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
I hope to see the next chapter really soon!
Date: May 10 2015 11:07 AM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
Hey, it's great to see you return to this great story. I hope you are able to continue producng new chapters. Don't worry about writer's block; whatever you muster out will likely be just fine. One hope I have is that the main charachter simply begin shrinking to a tiny size without necessarily morphing into an ojbect or clothing particle. I think being human and tiny at Summer's feet would be interesting to see. And punishing as hell for him.
Date: April 03 2015 12:05 AM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
One of the greatest stories i've read
Date: April 02 2015 6:47 PM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
Good chapter. I'm really a big fan of this story. There just isn't enough transformation on this site. Hopefully, you'll see this story to the end. A good story shouldn't be abandoned, and by god, this one is a goody.
Date: February 13 2015 11:11 AM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
AWESOME story! It's not neccesarily the detail you focus on, you just say the right words at the RIGHT time. Authors like Charles Dickens sum up a whole paragraph in one sentence and you feel you're getting the same detail (and you're doing great at it!). Not a fan of the whole incest thing. Great trick as a reader is to pretend step/sister/brother.
Date: February 09 2015 3:36 PM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
Yes!! You made him into panties!! PLEASE do it again soon! The butt is the best part! Maybe since he hates bad smells she could fart on him all day for disobeying her.. But I'd love to see it happen again!! I love this story and I love your writing! Please keep this going and keep the chapters just as long as the last one please??!! Booty booty booty!!! :)
Date: January 27 2015 5:27 PM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
Beautiful writing style. A lot of the stories on this site are written so poorly, but yours is a delight to read. Keep it up!
Date: January 26 2015 3:21 PM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
Really nice story - can't wait for more foot action.
Though I have to say, I think the opportunity with Simone, where the doc asks is she wanted to try him on, was an opportunity missed. Even if she quickly tried him on it would have been a nice way to mix it up for the hero.
Keep up the great work my friend!
Author's Response:
This isn't the last we've seen of Simone ;)
Date: January 25 2015 9:34 PM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
Nice!!! I want more!! Need more!! Transform him into panties! Hahahah booty please lol.. I freakin love this story!!