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Reviewer: NotKen Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2015 5:04 AM Title: A Day at the Mall

Great story so far! I love the way you keep a qucik rhythm but still make time for those little details that really pulls the reader into the moment. Awesome story!

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2015 8:41 AM Title: A Day at the Mall

great story so far

Reviewer: blackairow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2015 4:41 PM Title: A Day at the Mall

Awesome story so far, really liking the set up of it. :) Can't wait for the next chapter. The first though that crossed my mind was that the neighbours would see him going between rooms, had me nervious for him. 

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