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Reviewer: blackairow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 12:27 PM Title: Crime and Punishment

Great to see this story back. The idea of turning into a bug is an interesting question. After reading this chapter I went back and read read the last couple chapters, not sure if Simone is lying in this chapter bc of Dr Arnold or if she was lying the first time around about the overloading bit. Either way looking forward to next chapter

Reviewer: womenfood Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 10:14 PM Title: Crime and Punishment

I wonder why she lies?then I will never be transformed back until my sister find the truth in the end?
And I can be transformed into food if my sister really want to get rid of me

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