Reviews For Miss Smiths Revenge
Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2015 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The beginning
Date: February 13 2015 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The beginning
Man, the writing is beautiful!
I love the fact that you value dirty panties as a way of entrapment for a shrunken slave. Nice touch
Only thing I didn't like was that she was a BBw but that's just my opinion so you don't have to change it.
Other than that, this seems like a very promising story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2015 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The beginning
Date: February 13 2015 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The beginning
Holy shit! THIS IS EPIC! KEEP IT COMING! You write the way I like it
Reviewer: kongoboy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2015 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The beginning
Date: February 12 2015 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The beginning
Well I really thought the start of this story was informative and well written, Please keep going!
Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2015 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The beginning
Date: February 12 2015 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The beginning
Nice start. Looking forward to more. Nice job.