Great, I like the Mom growth, I hope she grows even bigger and hotter!

Hmm, I wonder what has Patricia's attention. It's so unlike her to behave that way. And poor Elsie...I'm hoping she gets to reunite with Alex soon!

Yes! So wool to see this back! I worry for our hero, and while I don't need to know details, I must know if there is hope of his rescue!

Author's Response:

Thanks Newb! It means a lot to have your readership and comments.

My hibernation has ended. Many chapters have been added, and each one seems to be building on the struggles the separated couple will face. Elise and her desperate sexual urges, resulting in a lack of work ethic, yet leading to more aggressive behaviour. Alex and his forced servitude, the possible erosion of his humanity, and definite destruction of his self-control. What if one day he is taken off the drug, yet its effects have permanently addled his mind. Or perhaps Elise joins the Matriarch to find Alex, and becomes warped by their practices. The desperate tragedy of their story has so many different spirals. That your ray of light, your happy ending, seems like sunlight trying to shine at the seafloor.

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Nice updates, cool tragedy so far, can't wait for the happy bit.

Alex is settling into his new role, that isn't a good thing but it does keep the drama going. I just hope he doesn't get lost in it. 

Great to see this story get updated once more!!

Can't wait to see what Elise does!!

Good to see her side of the story, how she misses him. I half expect her to start hunting for the people who took him and then having to resist the brainwashing of the Matriarchy.

Wow! Didn't see that coming at all! It sheds a whole new light on the new dynamic between men and women in this world!

Well played, good sir. Well played.

Great story!!

Please continue your great work!

Any possibility the virus affects mental capabilities of both infected men and women to make them different than the uninfected but compatible with each other.

Since the infected women's brains are four times larger they might be different

Author's Response: Interesting take! I hadnt thought about that, but I suppose it's one way to look at it. I tried to frame it out a bit in some of the earlier chapters by giving theories, but I don't think I ever said for certain how it all works. That was sort of by design, to allow for some reader interpretation. Not sure if I pulled that off well enough. I'm definitely trying for a very fine line between the virus just periodically driving women to act differently and full out personality alteration. It's a tough thing to do. Thanks for your feedback! I've got lots more story planned and I'm going to do my best to keep new chapters coming every few-several days.

Piggybacking off of Nostory, will that Paradise be with Elise or the matriarchy?

This is going places! :)