[Report This]Date: June 17 2015 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Interesting changes in their society, it would be logical now that women have the size advantage, they would try to put men in the home. Kind of scares me a bit, hopefully men have a chance in this changing world. However still love this story and can't wait to read more!!
Date: June 12 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Are infected women inclined to feel hostile towards each other like competing females of animals? Vicky seems problematic enough with the argument and the bigger issue is extinction as human fertility rates plunge.
I think Elise and Vicky will have a very interesting fight, Alex and Jason better be on their guard.
Author's Response:
Based on what we've seen of Ash's relationship with Elise, I don't think that's necessarily the case. Certainly, we've seen that Elise is very protective of her mate, but Ash didn't *appear* to view Elise as a threat. In fact, she seemed to genuinely want to help her and Alex be together (despite her own sexual demands). Though Elise has a soft spot in my heart, Ash is probably my favorite character. Hopefully I can do reasonable justice to her emotional/motivational complexity before the end. We will see. I have the broad strokes of the ending written, but there are still a lot of blanks to fill in. I do tend to use an outline when writing, but frankly, I find myself trashing most of it in favor of the scenes that I see developing in my head as I go along.
Recognizing that Vicki hasn't gotten much "screen" time yet, I would venture to say that she may have a somewhat different personality than either of the other infected introduced so far.
Date: June 12 2015 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Great Work on the story so far, haven't followed one like this in a long time. I can't what for the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: June 12 2015 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Love this new update! By the way I am so excited you have decided to write about Amazonian women as I believe that specific height range maximizes contact. If they get over 50 ft contact becomes limited and normal sex is nearly impossible. At least for Amazons they can still have normal sex. Also I am glad you have delved into the personalities and wold of the characters, shows you have really put some thought into this. And thank you for writing a gentle love story as I am a sucker for these types of stories. I get tired of the mindless violence of giantesses crushing and killing people. Again, great job on this story, can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I appreciate the feedback. I agree with your thoughts. As you said, I feel the Amazon size gives you maximum compatibility between partners. Still enough to turn the power dynamic on its head, but not so much that I would struggle to understand how the characters could cuddle and hold hands (in any meaningful way). That's not to say there aren't a lot of great stories on here with more pronounced size differences though. On the contrary, this site is loaded with them. I'm always amazed at the creativity that allows some of those relationships to work. I just find it difficult to write.
Gentle stories have always been my preference as well. I find it compelling when a loving character doesn't act the way you might expect, or perhaps the way their lover expects.
Date: June 10 2015 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
I can imagine Jason's girlfriend might not be so horny since he is not infected like Alex, it will be good to see how the couples interact.
I notice you mentioned you're an engineer by profession and I thought I was the only engineer here( well my degree will be in engineering), I've always found it hard to get the flow some of the other writers here get with ease.
Author's Response:
Yes, I was in aerospace, but I'm more focused on systems engineering/program management now.
As you said, I am amazed by the ease with which others here seem to be able to pen their stories. For me, the greatest struggle isn't necessarily coming up with dialogue or setting, but keeping the detail at a high enough level. I guess it's the engineer in me...
Date: June 09 2015 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Elise was quick to forgive and also we learned a bit about how some of those affected by the virus may see men, she can't be the only one to feel that way.
Author's Response:
I would think not, indeed :)
Date: June 05 2015 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Thanks for the compliments but I don't consider myself a master. Not yet, I have much to learn and improve on.
I understand that sometimes good stories die because the author feels its bad because no one gives feedback, no one comments and you sort of just give up. Yeah I know the feeling, got really bad about a year ago.
So if I see something I like, I will review it so the author knows he is on the right track.
Oh and glad to hear your wife liked it and great to hear that the marriage has lasted 10 years.
Date: May 30 2015 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Great job! Looking forward to more chapters.
[Report This]Date: May 29 2015 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Uh oh Elise has some competition on her hands. Hopefully Alex makes the right decision and chooses Elise over Ash.
[Report This]Date: May 28 2015 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Absolutely fantastic!!
Date: May 27 2015 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Wow, amazing stuff here! I really adore how Alex and Elise act around each other, so loving but careful not to ruin their friendship.
Date: February 26 2015 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
A very talented start, showing human levels of emotions and restraint. I find the relationship between Elise and our MC to be very endearing, especially Elise's level of respect. I think your story has good potential, and I look forward to future chapters
[Report This]Date: February 26 2015 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
WOW, i've been reading stories for years, both here and on other sites, but that's the first time i feel so much potential in a story that need to review it.
you're doing really good, most stories don't even come close to what you just did.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I have a lot of ideas, just trying to figure out the best way to make them into a cohesive story at the moment.
[Report This]Date: February 24 2015 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
What an excellent story!! Can't wait to see where this goes...
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words!