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Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2015 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Dinner Date

I really enjoy your world building chapters, even more then the sexual ones. I say a mixture of Alex, followed by Elise, and maybe a little from the third girl for a change in pov.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback, it's nice to know how the various POVs are received.  I've toyed with adding a third "misc" POV from time to time.  Maybe I could work that in.

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