Date: May 27 2015 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Wow, amazing stuff here! I really adore how Alex and Elise act around each other, so loving but careful not to ruin their friendship.
Date: February 26 2015 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
A very talented start, showing human levels of emotions and restraint. I find the relationship between Elise and our MC to be very endearing, especially Elise's level of respect. I think your story has good potential, and I look forward to future chapters
[Report This]Date: February 26 2015 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
WOW, i've been reading stories for years, both here and on other sites, but that's the first time i feel so much potential in a story that need to review it.
you're doing really good, most stories don't even come close to what you just did.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I have a lot of ideas, just trying to figure out the best way to make them into a cohesive story at the moment.
[Report This]Date: February 24 2015 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
What an excellent story!! Can't wait to see where this goes...
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words!