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Reviewer: RMWALA Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2015 11:39 AM Title: Prologue

I'm really liking this story, always happy to see a new chapter added! 



Author's Response:

I'm trying to add them as soon as possible. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2015 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 4: Wet T-shirt contest (Part 1)

Well revenge comes cold and swift, unless somehow the crowd still wants Mexican boobs over the mountainous mammaries from the USA. 

 

Loved it and hope to see the rest of the story!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story, and I hope you like the rest. Thank you!

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 3: Dealing with locals (Part 3)

This story caused me to read your other material. I really enjoy your writing. Please keep doing a great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your comment. I'm really flattered. I hope you like the rest of the story.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2015 12:14 PM Title: Prologue

My guess was right Chloe is a "badass" hehe. good chap continue!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. And yeah, she is, hehe.

Reviewer: Guygan Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2015 6:12 AM Title: Prologue

Chloe is very very bold! Which is a great trait for a giantess to have, and it's a very good foil to Donna's Meekness. I really like the dynamic between the giant girls and the angry tourists, I'm looking forward to seeing where this story is going especially the part about the tiny sleeping little guy on Donna's belly. Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you like the story. And yes, the belly part should be fun. Thanks again and I hope you like the rest of the story.

Reviewer: Nodqfan Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2015 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 3: Dealing with locals (Part 3)

Chloe trying to help Donna be more confident should be interesting, though I kind of like Donna the way she is. I look forward to reading what happens next.



Author's Response:

Oh, don't worry, I'm not changing her. I like her the way she is, too. I hope you like the rest of the story.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2015 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 3: Dealing with locals (Part 3)

That was fun, Chloe may be the smallest but she has the most guts of all the girls!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment. And yeah, she needs to compensate somehow for her height.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 2: Dealing with locals (Part 2)

Donna playing with the kids was super cute. Loved the "gigante" attacking the castle.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you liked the chapter. I had a lot of fun writing it.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 2: Dealing with locals (Part 2)

Love this chapter. Her playing with the local kids was just adorable, though her decision to set up a slip and slide in the tiny area was really ill-conceived and her tantrum was definitely petty. Like this story so far and I hope it keeps with the mostly gentle nature. They're people, just smaller, and the two characters you've featured so far have been careful around them, so far.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for your comment. I'm glad you like it. The whole tantrum and slide stuff was her being childish and immature, not evil or anything like that. I really hope you like the rest of the story and thanks again for commenting.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2015 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 2: Dealing with locals (Part 2)

I bet the 3rd girl will be less clement if attack!hehe



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment. I hope you like the next chapter.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2015 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 2: Dealing with locals (Part 2)

So one humiliated a Mexican, the other got humiliated by them. This is interesting. Wonder what our third girl will get?



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. Well, we'll just have to wait and see. ;)

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2015 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: Dealing with locals (Part 1)

More. Please. I'm waiting



Author's Response:

I'll add more as soon as possible, I promise.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Dealing with locals (Part 1)

Very good chapter! Will the girls meet any other people besides Mexicans?

Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you liked the chapter. As for other people...I don't want to give away spoilers. But you'll find out. Sorry!

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 3:34 PM Title: Prologue

This is a bunch of fun

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Dealing with locals (Part 1)

I love multi-sized worlds and the gentle but playful and teasing tone you have going here. Will definitely be checking out future chapters.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. It's super nice to see there are people who don't mind if the story doesn't have evil and cruel giants. I hope you like the rest of the story.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 1: Dealing with locals (Part 1)

Now this was a blast to read. I don't think Linda was being too mean, the yellow bikini girl was being overly aggressive towards her and she merely paid her back in kind. 

As for what the girl could do to her, I checked the charts and Americans are far from the largest of the sizes listed so that tiny little girl could have a Dutch or Scandinavian friend to make Linda pay. 

Not that I like the tiny girl so whatever they do to Linda, I'll feel bad for her. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. I'm really glad you liked this chapter. I don't want to give any spoilers about what will happen next, but you'll find out later. I also don't think Linda was too mean. She might have overdone it a little, but she didn't start it. I'm glad you like the character, too. Thanks again!

Reviewer: io1908 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 11 2015 11:31 PM Title: Prologue

I love those series and I'm glad there's a new story. Please add chapters and variety in! It's my fave! Waiting for more(always..)!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the comment. I really appreciate you like the series in general. I hope you like this story too. Thanks again.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2015 9:09 AM Title: Prologue

good chapter, can't wait for the next one! Are you planning to continue other stories?



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you liked it. And yes, I do plan to continue other stories. As soon as the writer's block goes away. Meanwhile, I hope you enjoy this one.

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