Reviewer: Orpheus Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2015 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 2: All Alone

Jacksmith brother/sister content without ulterior motives or malicious intent? Am I dreaming, is this heaven? How long have you planned this gem to be?

Author's Response:

Hehe. Don't worry, it's just an early sign of the apocalypse. I've had this one sitting around for a while, actually, and only recently got back around to finishing it up.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2015 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 2: All Alone

I definitely like this story. Her taunting is really just ribbing and isn't hurtful or malicious. You can easily sense the love she has for her brother under her words. On the flip side, his complaining isn't really real, it's just his way of taunting and ribbing her.

Author's Response:

Ribbing is a good word for it. They do care a lot about each other, even if they have a funny way of showing it.