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Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2015 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 11: A Shot in the Light

I love how you brought back the closet trap that was mentioned earlier, very well done. I also look forward to seeing how Roxy will deal with Grace.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I figured 2 mentions of a plot device saves it from being a total deus ex machina...

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2015 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 11: A Shot in the Light

This story was just plain, old-fashioned fun. It had many of the standard giantess tropes, but you presented them with skill and creativity, making it easy to suspend disbelief. The characters' personalities held true throughout the work, and that kept me coming back to read further. The appearance of Grace was necessary as a means of bringing an end to the fun, but at least there's one more chapter. Excellent story! It makes me want to explore others in this universe.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I'm glad the characters felt consistent. And I definitely plan to write more stories in this universe.

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