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Reviewer: combine45 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 11:58 AM Title: Chasing a Storm

Hmm, so there are way more demi's than we thought. I'm almost suprised humanity hasn't been completely wiped out with that many so close nearby. It seems like there is a whole other world past those mountains. At this point Iona's revenge for her village seems so petty compared to the scale of whats going on in those lands as a whole. I'm interested to learn more about what kind of person Lady Ophelia is towards other demi's.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07 2015 12:10 PM Title: Prologue

Her every move uproots trees and kills without her even knowing, she could very well be a monster without even trying. A good starting point for her would be to kill the demi who destroyed her village, do some good for humanity.

Reviewer: combine45 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2015 5:10 PM Title: Burying the Past

Damn that was some sexy unaware interaction (destruction) at the end there. I'm glad you are doing a Growth story now. While I love your other 2 shrink stories I've always been a fan of the destruction a full grown giantes can inflict on the environment and on man made structures. Iona was very sad about what happend to her village and her brother, but she's already ruined another families lives through a simple lack of coordination with her new body. I can't wait to see what kind of havoc she will wreak later.



Author's Response:

Haven't had much experiance with growth stories so I'm hoping it goes over well! Its a bit hard (yet a fun exercise) to ponder every little thing that could go wrong if she wasn't careful. If she isn't careful the destruction she could cause would be akin to a natural disaster so I'm hoping to explore that a bit. Really, its not much of a surprise demi regard humans so low as they don't even need to try to kill them.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2015 1:38 AM Title: The Mad House

I just found this and was hoping you'd continue with it.
The plot/concept is something that intrigues me a great deal. Giving her demi status to invoke revenge on the other demi that slaughtered her village and family or just abuse her newfound size like any other demi would. While having to be at Yorik's beckon call whenever he deems it necessary.

aaron

Author's Response:

Not to worry, I'm still continuing it. I have a rough idea of where its going to go and key points I want to hit so its not as clear cut as my other stories haha. Recently I've found a surge of inspiration towards this so hopefully I'll be getting some more chapters out.

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2015 3:36 PM Title: Prologue

A very interesting start! I really like the concept behind this story. Can't wait to see where it goes!

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