Date: October 14 2015 2:52 AM Title: The Travelling Trio
I'm afraid there is something terribly wrong with this story. A huge flaw that I came to witness, Completely unforgivable I might add.
That is that the story is incomplete! What a travesty! Finish this sick little piece of art and do the whole community a favor!
But seriously, Awesome story bro and this is not the first one I liked. It is the first one I felt I needed to log in to comment on though. Keep it up
Author's Response:
Well, not finished but added a new chapter so wish (sorta) granted haha. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: May 06 2015 5:21 PM Title: The Travelling Trio
I love the variety you've been giving us with your story setting's and characters. I'm very intrigued to learn more about Qora. At first she seemed concerned with freeing Adella from her indoctrination, but after the attempted stragulation she seemed more in a punishing mood. I'm not familiar with Warhammer 40k at all so I don't know which factions are evil or not, but I'd assume there is some corruption and depth within all of them.
I kinda have a thing for big muscular warrior women like Adella once and a while, so your descriptions of her are definitly adding some heat to this this story as well. I wonder if we will see some more willingness from Adella in the future as well. Or if there will be a telepathically forced lesbian sex scene at some point. Lots of potential in this one!
Author's Response:
Oh, Warhammer is pretty... black and grey across the board. Technically Qora is the more evil of the two as she serves one of the Chaos Gods who are the default 'bad guys'. However, the Sisterhood itself is mostly comprised of indoctrinated religious zealots who'd probably kill a guy if he said a prayer to the God-Emperor wrong so really take your pick of who is more evil. I did wonder what it might be like to approach this story as someone who knew little about 40k, so good to know it doesn't keep it from being enjoyable!