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Reviewer: mercs2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

I check every day to see if this story has updated. Please don't stop writing it.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I won't. I just took a little break because I had a lot of work.

Reviewer: Huskyao Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

Keep going! Make her the most evil bitch in the world torturing him with her butt :)

Author's Response:

I wouldn't call her evil. Just very passionate about subjecting her favorite toy to her every whim. Gentle or not.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 3

So, she wasn't being somnabulistic (always wanted to use that word!) after all?

Author's Response:

I had to google the definition to that. But yes. Cindy is much more aware of our guy's predicament than we all think ;)

Reviewer: GalvanizedSpruce Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2015 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

You have a great writing style! When an author clearly has his or her own voice, you know there's talent involved and you clearly have it. And I have to say, the feet interactions were phenomenal! I'd love to see more of that , but frankly I'd love to see more of anything as long as it's part of this story.

 

Thanks for a great read, keep up the good work!

Reviewer: HuzToru Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2015 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Keep going :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Everyone's reviews are a great motivation to keep writing!

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

You have some skills and this story is absolutely a joy to read. I hope she finds him and that that she enjoys seeing him cry and beg from the overwhelming smell of her feet and socks.



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review! Truthfully, she is a mischevious person so we'll see what happens with our little hero

Reviewer: mimiru888 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 2

Enjoying the story so far, you did a very good job with you editing.

Can't wait to see what happens to him in the next chapter; Will our tiny hero be found as his struggles do nothing but stimulate our unaware heroine? Will he even make it out of his current predicament? Or will he be stuck on the dark side of her backdoor until after she gets up from her nap? Find out in the next exciting chapter! :P

Author's Response:

Haha well just wait for the next chapter and find out!:p

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love the story so far. This type of story is my favorite. Your writing is very detailed and the sentences have a good flow to them. I didn't notice and grammatical or spelling mistakes. If there was one complaint it would be that the chapters ar a little small but its a great story overall. I cannot wait for the rest of the story to unfold.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I try to write longer chapters but I'm getting better at them. I'm really hoping to fill each chapter with something for everyone so keep on the lookout!

Reviewer: mjfan45 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is what you should consider enough interest please PLEASE CONTINUE THIS

 



Author's Response:

Definitely a great show of interest. I'm just currently busy. Once I'm free, I will write a nice chapter to hold everyone's attention

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

He's going to need the breath control of Pop Star Kirby to withstand that kind of point-blank exposure to her f.o.

Author's Response:

Definitely. She's a nice girl but her feet are something vicious. Everyone should watch out if she ever notices you.

Reviewer: goku321 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2015 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm already inlove with this story, please continue it.

Author's Response:

I will! I plan to carry on with unaware for maybe one or two more chapters.

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2015 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Holy shit! This story so far is really awesome!! Straight to the good stuff!! Please continue. And if you can do updates as often as possible and keep the chapters long and detailed!! Don't forget to add ass action in it!! Giantess booty is the best!! Feet are good but not as much as a woman's ass! Lol anyways thank you for this story and I can't wait for the next chapter!!! This story is a 10 in my book.

Author's Response:

Thanks. Will definitely be adding ass stuff in the next chapter. I'll try to make the chapters a little longer.

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