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Reviewer: combine45 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think I know what your going for, kind of an artistic look at the regret of a willing victim. It still feels like a chapter is missing though. Probably cause I don't know anything about Lillian.



Author's Response:

Yeah I can understand that, this story was originally written for a crowd who knew the character very well already so I didn't put any effort into expanding on it any further.  So it is completely abstract as to who is who and what is what, and I imagine it is quite confusing as to what is going on. This is just meant to be a short, but thanks for the honest review, I appreciate it! ^^ 

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