Reviews For Omega: Touch
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Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2015 10:34 PM Title: Mission

Awe right as they were getting to the good part. Love this addition to the story.

Author's Response:

Hopefully there will be good parts aplenty in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Orpheus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 16 2015 4:19 PM Title: Mission

Really loving this story so far, I hope Lucy doesn't bite off more than she can chew.

In any case, was the wink by Neil in the second last paragraph an impulse thing, or is Lucy actually able to tell that he did it by sensing the impact of the sound waves from his eyelids slapping against each other?

I don't know much about blindness, but I'm fairly certain one can't see winks.

Neat chapter though, I love their interactions with each other.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. The wink was indeed just an impulse; Lucy can't detect it.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2015 11:27 AM Title: Mission

Oh boyz, lucie is quiet hot ane short-temper: an uppercut for a comment! al least Neil got (Omega!?) backup for her!



Author's Response:

Lucy doesn't handle mistreatment of her friends well. And the backup may or may not be Omega.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2015 8:22 AM Title: Mission

I can't believe I just realized she's blind.(I hope it specifically wasn't addressed because I missed it completely)
Now I understand their unique relationship a bit better.
This story is very entertaining and I can't wait to see what happens next.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. The blindness was referenced, but it is only directly mentioned a couple of times in the story. I had intended for it to be something people realized as they read.

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2015 4:57 AM Title: Mission

Some random text at the end wanted my comment; I feel wanted b25;. I hope the backup is omega company of one sort or another, it feels like it is.



Author's Response:

Always feel wanted! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Kusanagi Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2015 4:22 AM Title: Mission

Very sweet scene at the end there and while Neil couldn't talk her down he at least made sure she's not going to go it alone.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

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