Reviewer: mikeesan Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2016 11:25 PM Title: Insignificant

Amazing amount of details. The world needs more good nano unaware plots like this. Just two things I have to critism is, one just a minor personal thing, it was a bad idea in my oppinion to take his cell phone away so fast but a simple stomp. It would have been way more interesting to keep it and him having an ironic call later in the story. The 2nd thing is, how the character is a bit of "industractable", I am not really a fan of those plots. Other than that, awesome plot.

Author's Response:

I can understand why some people don't like when the character cannot be hurt, but for me it's more of a way just to move the story along smoothly and let it flow. Thomas would certainly be dead or at the least pretty badly injured with everything that's happened so far, and to me, that just doesn't make for a good story. Now, I'm not really a big fan of "wishing away" stuff like damage people recieve, but in the context of stories like these, it seems fine and appropriate since it's already past reality. 

Reviewer: GuyGoneSmall Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2016 8:30 PM Title: Insignificant

Cant wait for the next Chapter!!! Hope it comes soon!